Oh. My. God. This was absolutely incredible- you are my new favourite author! You write beautifully, and I'll be looking forwards to reading more of your excellent works in the future!

IT'S INCREDIBLLLLLEEEE! KYAAAA! D

Good story, I enjoyed reading it.

oh my... Leon ceirtainly is passionate in about everything he does, isn't he?

perfect fic! you captured their emotions and reactions beautifully.

:3

awe! sadly sweet! and now im yearning for more!

This was absolutely amazing. I have never read anything as perfect as this... It is sensual, beautiful, sexy, and elegant. There is not much to say that Gabriel hasn't already said, but I feel the need to repeat the praise even so. I will read this over and over. I have already read it twice, and doubt I will soon tire of it. Your portrayal of the characters, especially Count D, is spot on. Accurateness in personality is something that is usually forgotten in fanfiction, in favor of making the story seem more steamy or sweet. You, however, managed to capture accurateness, steam, and sweetness. I will be sure to read more of your works, because I doubt you have the capability to ever disappoint.

To begin with, I must say that I have never read any better written stories then yours. Your fluid writing is just the type I love to read, as it pulls in the writer and yet, keeps them upon the sidelines without another word.

You make Art in the form of words and I praise you with such words, such vocabulary, such description in your stories.

Now onto this little tale that you wrote.

I quite enjoyed this for, though I rarely ever read these types of Fan-fictions, but by the very Gods who I see as my Creators and Guardians, I have never seen such a well written, descriptive and simply perfectly wonderful and heated story.

The subtly of the descriptions and the explanations of that are given for each movement, no matter how small, was absolutely stunning, and then you have our Dear Detective bringing it all back together and into reality by his foul mouth, which I simply adore by the way!

The way you went about this story in general has me almost wishing for a second chapter to read. The story in itself I adore as a one-shot and I wouldn't care in the world for you not making a second chapter, for this in itself stands in it's own glory and prestige.

And upon the understanding that you gave with the Count, quite not wanting to part his lips to say the ever infallible words, it gives a certain understanding to those who know what Count is after reading the full series.

Upon placing the last line of the Count's in that final line it gives a sudden eerie chill to the aftermath of the heated passion and it directs it ever so perfectly. The passion and the Heat begins from ember into a raging fire, only to turn to ash and ember again, simply WAITING for the moment to appear for the fire to reappear, and then you have his simple line and your last few words that give everything a sudden cold breeze of not only hurt at what the Count said, but a certain understanding also of how he is feeling at the moment and how everything has turned out for him in his life.

You, darling, have made me, for the first time, simply re-read this story at least three times and still simply want more. Your touch here or there in the story makes it it's own unique and perfect style, but the simple elegance of the characters being placed out as if through the Manga makes the whole thing that more amazing.

I thank you for the amazing read, and will readily be waiting for anything more you write for you have set my heart a flame in adoration for your beautiful and simply magnificent writing.

With Luv,

Gabriel Mehayel

the last sentence was sad. why?

that was hot btw. u are good n lemon, eh?

Your PSOH fics are so hot. Great job, as always!

nnnngggghhh I'll be in my bunk. You're SUCH a sensual writer, and yet at the end, there's that depth, that awesome awesome STORY part.

I love this so much.

And D is for Denial...

I really liked the concept of him not allowing any words out lest he tell Leon something he'd regret and I loved that he cradles Leon and tells him things when he's certain Leon can't hear. Another brilliant PWP that says so much about them and the dynamic of their (potential) relationship. Your imagery is powerful (and sometimes hysterical- like Leon being so deep D could imagine tasting him!)

Well done.