| Reviews for The Rabbit Hole |
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SilverIceRing chapter 10 . 6/30/2013 Never played this game, but from what I read up on and what I see so far, it really does fit the kind of story those two would get involved in. Not only that, but it sounds like the kind of story that truly needs a hero to try to make things right. Hope you come back to this soon! |
NoCreativity chapter 10 . 9/20/2012 Love the story. Two issues though. First, shouldn't Yae be curious about how Touma is able to fight ghosts? Second, why isn't this in the crossover section? |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/6/2012 Wow, This could have been a very nice add-in Episode of the actual show. I'm dying for next Chapter now! |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/5/2012 I like the fights in this fic,glad to see it is challenging enough to not be "touch and kill" from touma,a balance dose of scary and epic. |
kevslave chapter 10 . 7/1/2012 Woah...I love you!(no gay meaning whatsoever) I never expected that to happen betweenthe Kiryu twins!(never played the game so doesn't no the difference) Anyway, I'll wait for more mind-blowing chapters!(Maybe return of the Kiryu twins lol) P.S. I saw your post about the index movie on animesuki. You should already know that it's comin next feburary. Sucks right... |
Lazyman12 chapter 10 . 6/30/2012 Wow this chapter was good. I'm still wondering what god will be please with the sacrificed by strangling people. It was really bugging me. Oh well keep updating! |
Lazyman12 chapter 8 . 5/20/2012 Wow |
kevslave chapter 9 . 5/19/2012 YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS...FINAALLY! My favorite fanfiction has returned I can't wait! Plz continue! But plz do it when your free. I know the problems we facewhile writing. I can wait. As long as your still...plz. |
cookie monster gurl chapter 9 . 5/19/2012 FINALLY! I need the next chapter! |
luwenjia chapter 9 . 5/18/2012 Yes you update this fic! Thank YOU! Please update original sin too. |
Deofiro chapter 8 . 9/15/2011 Shit i started reading chapter 1 at midnight and ended up reading all eight hapters in one go had to get weapon to feel safe reading this in the dark awsome friggin story keep em coming i'll be waiting with my wooden sowrd under the covers. |
kage15oni chapter 8 . 9/12/2011 i m a little lost,is yae human or a ghost? Still great work,cant wait4 chapter 9 |
anyomous chapter 8 . 9/10/2011 the kiryu house is the scariest of the game,n so is this chapter,good job! |
luwenjia chapter 8 . 9/9/2011 that was the scariest puzzle yet,yae provides a nice contrast2index,keep it up. I wonder if rabbit hole n original sin share the same world? |
Windraider chapter 7 . 7/25/2011 God damn, another great chapter! I read this and night and almost pissed myself. Sorry for the late review, I didn't have the guts to review at night. Although u should focus more on the spooky part. And keep humour down a bit, so that u can save the humour bit and then at the right moment make it explode! |