Man soooo sad and then BOOM HAPPY ENDING
The ending was so cute!
Savannah GilVe B

Why do you keep making them say "Ya"? It's completely out of character for both Rory and Jess. How hard is it to write two more letters and make it a "yeah"?

I LOVE the way you think! For awhile there, that was EXACTLY how I've always thought this scene SHOULD'VE gone! :)

First off, I have to commend you on completing a story so quickly. It takes me years to finish things. I'm the epitome of a thoughtless fan fiction writing. So way to not only write a lovely piece of fiction, but also make your fans happy.

The story was so simple, which I adore. Frustrating, since they never meet at the right time, but that is the epitome of the Rory and Jess story. i've always said they were perfect for each other, they just were always meeting at the wrong time and your story was that idea, just expanded. And of course, a happy ending is always wonderful. I love the tortured aspects of their relationship but it's nice to read things where they finally end up together, in a believable way. You didn't fall into cliche. it was just, finally, the right time. And the ending was so visually epic. I was imagining it if it would be in a movie and it had a very Casablanca epic feel to it.

Well done, dear. I look forward to future works from you.

Beautiful! Really fantastic. I love the parallels to his book, how hard it was for him to give in, how she apologised, I love the ear nibbling and the "Sh!" at the end, priceless!

I'm at the same stage with my fanfic now, and I did do some things a similar way (but that's because they're still them) and it's nice for me to read something like this right now.

You've done one heck of a job with this fic and I certainly hope that you'll be writing more!

Thank god! I was going CRAZY here! It's amazing and beautiful and I love the snippets of the final chapter inserted in there. It makes it feel more complete, somehow, and I love how it fills in the gaps of what they're NOT saying.

Great ending, and this is me BEGGING you to post more Lit stories soon, because you write them so beautifully!

good ending.

keep it going

( gone again?

gasp!

Interesting twist on things!

poor Rory.

This trumps the Distillers and the hockey game.

I'm glad she's not talking to Dean, though.

Yay for Lane!

oh the throes of Jess and timing.

WHOA. Epic confrontation! I like that Jess is calling Rory out on her mistakes. People don't do that enough (and people like to blame Jess for stuff way too often. Swan Song? ALL Rory's fault, and yet people like to point to that as a Big Jess Mistake).

It makes me wonder what it is that Jess put in there that can have given her such a stunning reaction! UPDATE SOON! We're DYING here! You've got this amazing thing going... just... UPDATE!

And since I'm guessing that the next chapter will be the last (*sad*), may I please request that you write more stories SOON?

Am really enjoying this story, I really like the misunderstandings between them - communication never was one of their strong suits, was it? Or at least, not with the things that mattered...

AMAZING. Best chapter you've written by far.