| Reviews for Heart of Metal |
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Herobrinegal chapter 6 . 6/15/2018 Will this be continued? |
LordCooler chapter 1 . 12/15/2011 Just read this first chapter, band I'll have you know I will have to catch up soon! :D very interesting concept of Metal having a chao, I've always wanted that since SA2B -LordCooler |
Queen Reverie chapter 6 . 12/14/2011 I'm so glad to see you've decided to continue with this story. It was truly one of my favourites. I shall eagerly await your next update! |
DJ-SlashMusika21 chapter 5 . 8/27/2010 This was amazing, good details and the plot development was spot on as well. Metal Sonic is starting to gain more character which I like. Overall, great work and update soon! |
Blue Kaous chapter 5 . 8/26/2010 Interesting chapter! I bet Eggman is going to use Amy for the same reason as Metal..to lure in Sonic! |
DJ-SlashMusika21 chapter 4 . 7/31/2010 Sweet looking chapter dude! :D I like it! What exactly is Eggman doing with Chaos Energy that could be that destructive? This is looking good so update soon! |
Blue Kaous chapter 4 . 7/28/2010 This chapter was fantastic. I'm very, very curious to see what Eggman is planning this time...either way, it cannot be good. Perhaps he's gonna cause a global collision like the test of Green Hill Zone and Westopolis? |
DJ-SlashMusika21 chapter 3 . 7/26/2010 Pretty good work with Shadow being apparently ambushed and Robo Knuckles and Sonic teaming up to defeat those goons. But what is so important that Robo Knuckles wants to destroy it? Interesting. Amy is definitely getting it bad though, poor pinky. Good job so update soon. |
DJ-SlashMusika21 chapter 2 . 7/26/2010 Amazing chapter name firstly so bravo for that. As for how you write action, wow, you're pretty good at that as well. Since I was unable to read the first one, I'll say that these events are pretty well thought out and original. Like who would trust Eggman with the Chaotix firstly? xD Great work. |
DJ-SlashMusika21 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 I've just started reading this story thanks to the recommendation my friend Blue Kaous gave for this story. So far, amazing, you really bring Metal into character and the writing and thoughts flow so well. Dialogue was amazing as well. I see big things for this story! :D |
Blue Kaous chapter 3 . 7/22/2010 Absolutely, stunningly, fabulous. Your writing is clear, and vivid. You manage to bring color, and octane to your words, even in simple dialogue. I Love it! You're doing great with this story, it's nice to see someone focusing on Metal Sonic for a change. Wonder what's going on in that base? |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 3 . 6/28/2010 Ooh! Creepy! Poor Sonic, Shadow, and Amy! Dude, did Metal wipe Amy's memory CLEAN? Nice... And poor Shadow! Wonder what happened to him? SONIC! Yeesh...frankly, I wouldn't want to be falling in the blackness either! And the line about 'all of his friends growing up without him' was so sad! It does place cause for wonder about the future, though... :( |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 2 . 6/24/2010 lol. The part with Shadow was hilarious! U Rock on! This was really well written, and you got the characterization exactly right! Dude, Metal was CREEPY in this, but I loved it! U Can't wait for the next chapter! (By the way, since you said to tell you, this is my first time reading this fic, but it's BRILLIANT all the same!) |
ChaotixController chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 I want to find out what happens next, Please continue and update. |
PerfectPhoenix chapter 2 . 6/14/2010 Dang, this story is awesome. I already liked the first chapter and the second one was even better. Awesome job! |