Great story. I really enjoyed it

im getting flashbacks to the end of Princess Diaries.
"miracles happen once in a while, when you believe"
This was cute and well written. Love the way you told this story.

I really wish this was how it had gone in the show. I love Shelby as a character, and I really think you've done her justice in this fic. Still part ice-Queen but human, underneath the hurt and bitterness. A brilliant piece of work!

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Hey! Good to see a new story from you :) I'm afraid I don't know the show at all, so please bear with me on this one. That being said, I can still enjoy your writing. This was very good, I liked the use of the present tense, it can be tricky, but you made it work perfectly. I liked how you captured the main character's voice as well, with little interjections such as the 'Well, duh'. nice touch of levity as well. It was full of emotion, but not overdone at all, and I loved your descriptions also. Lovely ending too, great job :)

That was incredibly sweet and well-written! I'm so glad they made Shelby her mother.

That was so good! I absolutely loved it and I think that maybe you should make a second chapter!

Aww! That was so sweet! I loved it. Great job.

Aww, this is so cute! I really hope that Shelby wants to know Rachel because she cares about her. This is an amazing story!

I love it! This was well written and perfectly executed. I really and truly love this story. "You hurt her, and I'll hunt you down wherever you run." that was my favorite line LOL. Well done! :D

P.S. I have watched that duet so many times, and I still cry when I watch it :)