Even after all these years, I keep coming back to this story. I found something wonderful in the beautiful writing here, and I cannot escape it. I come back and read it probably once a year it seems. Love it so much!

This was an amazing story! I hope to read more of your stuff!

Wonderful loving story, wait u till the .middle of this tale for the excitement to unfold.

Thanks for sharing your story. I enjoyed it.

I hope Edward’s having the house redone for them.
Carlisle...mmmmmmm... not sure how I feel. He said something about getting rid of the whore but it was also said he just wanted her held until demands where met. He told that Edward was seeing Gwen but was he actually risking Edward’s life? I would need more insight into Carlisle’s mind, his thought process and what he thought the end result would be. A persons intentions is a big deal. Did he want Bella dead? Did he know he was putting Edward in mortal danger? He was definitely an ass who wanted control of his sons and everything only his way. I guess he also wanted Edward to suffer some because he felt Edward didn’t show him the admiration and respect that he felt he deserved while he was growing up. Did he want Bella dead? He seemed to be beside himself when he thought Esme was in the hands of some maniac. He was putting Bella in the hands of same maniac and it didn’t bother him. So it was ok if she was being tortured and raped even if his intent was not to kill? Carlisles sins seem too great to me...

I hate nothing more than Edward leaving Bella for her own good in a story. I love it when they face things together head on.

Just re-read this for the 3rd time... One of my favorites that I always come back to. Such an amazing story.

And That's where you lost me. I'm breaking up with you. LOL It's not you, it's me Your writing it very good. I really like the story so it's nothing you've done. I have Edward issues. I basically can't stand the self-loathing, brooding, "l know what's better for you" prick. But at least you gave Bella a backbone. Don't hate me. You'll find someone who appreciates you for the fine writer you are.

I like this. I'm not a ExB genre reader however this reminds me of a movie a saw with Reese Witherspoon. A different trail, not the AT. On the west coast. somewhere between northern California and Canada. People did the journey for different reasons. Good movie, and this is a good story.

I read this the third time, I think. I am not sure what chapter I reviewed. So : of course Charlie would just "spill the facts" , Edward and Bella are awesome, Emmet is adorable

I have been quietly reading everything you have posted. I love your writing. Thank you for sharing your storytelling gift.

Omg absolutely loved this story! It was amazing! I was so hooked! I’m sad to be done with it but the great thing is I can always read it again. Again amazing job! Loved the the characters and the story.

I always love your stories and reread them often. You write so beautifully.

Mickey

Loved it.
So happy for them.
Damn dogs liking carlise. Lol
Baby steps.
Thank you for sharing.

Loved it.
I so fell in love with these guys.
They have both come so far in that year.
Mike is still an idiot. Lol.
Love Charlie.
So happy for them and how its all turned out.