I absolutely love this story! It was so good.

Como lloré madre mía . Pero preciosa con final feliz. Enorabuena.

i liked this story. the grammar was a bit course, but when you got a beta, it got better. i know english isn't your 1st language, but having a dictionary for words you can't spell correctly will help you a lot. words that sound the same, but are spelled differently is when a dictionary comes in handy. all in all, you write very well and i like your fan fiction. they are original and the plot leaves the reader happy and satisfied. oh, and your lemons aren't to bad either. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Really great storynice twist

This was very good.

Im a little bit confusedbut well its a good story

Lol panties is the prize hahahahaha

Holy cow that was crazy! It was hot, made me cry, and scream at the screen. Bravo!

WHAT?!

Holy buildup, Batman! _ I'm on the verge of a nose bleed here.

that ending needs work its to confusing plus you need to keep it going. except for the ending it is a good story.

Why did you chose the name you did for this ff?

Great fic loved it!

Preciosa

OK I didn't see that coming. Omg! Super good, go back and save the world. We miss details like that did she change? Maybe you can extend the story? Yesssss