Reviews for Smile
Shira zuka chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
That's one of the best horror fanfics ever.I have been searching such fanfics. KUDOS.
xX Mochi Devil Xx chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Aaarrgghh! It has scarred me for life! Just kidding! ; )
You write really well
Keep up the good work! !
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
AXEL IS DEAD...NOOOOOO!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
"I'm not going to cut your penis off, you idiot" Just imagining Roxas saying that all calmly with a twisted smile. I laughed so hard my ribs hurt.
Anon chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
FINALLY! Someone else who's seen the Ring. I appreciate your sense of horror. This was really great.
Delicious.Pain chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Delicious...I do suggest you write more erotic stories like this one!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
This was … actually… pretty good.

Luv it
ParadiseAvenger chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
I love horror, too. This was rather creepy.
Whiskey chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
You are one sick kid... Reading that fic made me feel so scared... you are a goddamn good writer! I always liked the sick and crazy ones. Keep it up ;)
bloody-black-valentine chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
Ha ha ha, ew
RoxasGirl chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
this is pretty darn good. inspired me to start my own horror story, i;m somewhat of a 'horroholic', as you put it. maybe you should write what happens to Demyx sometime, it would be pretty awesome.
76Blank47 chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
this story was written so well.

when i came to the part of roxas stabbing his eyes out,i purposely skipped it cause i was gettin scared.

no other story has actually made me scared like this.
phiX3 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I 3 this story the graphics were awesome! please make more :)
bummersummer chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I love thiS! Write what he does to Demyx! Exept someone saves him.
J.R. Jenx chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
That was... really amazing but incredibly disturbing.

But, you know what they say. The human imagination is scarier than the actual writing.

-dies-

~Jenx
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