I know it's been a few years but I had to tell you how much I loved this story! It's hard to find a good, multi-chapter M/M story (especially with how the show ended) and this was just what I was looking for! Loved every minute of it, I really didn't want it to end! Thanks for writing it and I hope that last year of school went well!

i like the cousin I just hope it doesnt come back to bite her

Mary asking for help?

Love Katie?

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED this story. You have both Mary and Marshall's voices down pat and though I would have preferred to see more of their 'honeymoon' period of their newly minted relationship, this was a fantastic story. :)

Ok, I'm extremely impatient to read the next chapter, but I just had to comment. I've been reading your story here for the last...3 hours (missing work, mind you!) and I can't put it down. You've got Mary and Marshall NAILED and chapter 13 is my favorite so far. For the sweet Marshall and open Mary and the lovely sexual tension that hasn't really entered the picture yet, but that I can feel bubbling beneath the surface. I sincerely hope this series (IPS) ends the way your story seems to be going. Friday can't come soon enough or slow enough, it seems.

That was fantastic. Really and truely. I enjoyed every minute and will happily admit to playing hooky a bit at work to read more. I can't wait to read more of your work. Congrats on doing well in school. I hope that graduation comes soon with less stress and more free time. :)

This story made my week. I love how you made Mary and Marshall so...Mary and Marshall. ; You did wonderful with his tendency to talk on and on, and I love how you got inside both their minds with how they would react to certain things.

Not much else to say, it was just too amazing!

OKay, that's an awful lot of wind up for such a tiny sexual allusion at the end. Geez, if you don't want to write it, that's fine, but at least don't leave it like that. How about a tasteful fade to black, or just a kiss, a real kiss with open mouths? I mean, it wasn't even it's own paragraph! I actually missed it the first time and had to re-read the ending to understand what had just happened. I hope it wasn't as quick for Mary as it was for me, because seriously, I blinked and it was over.

~Your Worshipfulness

Fabulously written, very in character, awesomely credibly relationship story line. Thanks for writing a story that is so developed, true to M/M and not 'M' :D Very hard to get these characters 'together' in a canonical sense, but you managed to do it quite well. I also appreciated your OC, Katie - she was a great foil for Mary. While others may criticize the way it wrapped up, I think it was great. Perhaps, however, begging for you to write a sequel at a later date ;) Look forward to reading more of your work. Best of luck with your last year of school!

That was awesome and I hope that you will write more IPS. Thanks

Three words... Mary Sue much?

(even so I do not mind reading)

Katie seems a little overly Mary Sue-y if you get what I'm saying (although most non-cannons are)

What a gripping story! I love the cousin! Mary definitely needs someone to look out for her... other than Marshall! Thay are sucha good pair... thank you for taking all this time, and give us a beautiful story! More please... ?

Awwww I loved this story so much(: And I loved Katie

This was wonderful to read. It was stirring and heartfelt, it gave me a little ache in my chest at times. You write Mary very well. You didn't fall into the overused 'and then Mary found she was loved and her heart grew three sizes and she no longer had issues', Mary getting past her past and she and Marshall coming together happened very organically and they were in character all the way. I loved going on that journey with them.

I also liked going on a little journey with you. Congratulations on all you've accomplished, you have a lot to be proud of. Good luck in the future.

Again, beautiful story. In fact, I think I'll go read your other work because I liked this so well.

Thank you.