worst fic ever don't read

Enjoying the story.

Overall lame..YOU didn't even have the common courtesy to write introductions of Jack, Daniel, Tea'l etc etc..

Where the FUCK is JACK, Daniel and Tea'l in all this..Who give a SHIT about Jacob and Sam! No wonder this story failed.

Your HOMOPHOBIC but instead you'd "pair" Harry with Sam*too old* and honestly, I KNEW it the moment you'd said that you'd NO-WAY do Slash..Really lame and pathetic of you BUT this story is OLD and even when YOU "updated" it took you yrs to get this "little" written and it's abandoned, which I'm not surprised.

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.

A great story here so far! I look forward to reading more!

not bad ... its a shame you have not completed it.

While rereading this story I noticed the Trump reference, and it stood out to me because I don't remember it being in the story when I first read it. Very odd inclusion.

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Please?

"If there was one thing that was sacred, it was his mind, the only thing that truly belonged to him" cough cough horcrux in his head lol, but no this is awesome, only one, rather major point I would like to make, in the A/N at the start you state Harry won't be as whiny and broody as in cannon, then go and have almost a whole chapter dedicated to him being broody, which is much worse than in canon.

Great writing overall though

-den den

I did enjoy your dead story. Sorry to see your pursuing other interests.

Love this story, hope you update one day :):):)

some minor grammar errors but an interesting story that I hope you one day update

Been 3 years.. must be a massive chapter you're working on, heheh.