I like your Shepard's voice, distinct and a believable combination of sentiment and practicality.

BTW, it's "soldering iron." I hope you don't mind my correcting that detail ).

Nice one!

I really like it!

Specialy the "It's yellow" part... Totaly my thought at some ME1 clothes P

LOVE this. It made me smile multiple times, as well as sniffle a little.

Nicely done. Good little piece that makes the picture way less creepy. (I figured Cerberus included it because they've been spying on femShep for a long long time.)

I think I prefer this to "Cerberus knows everything about you~!" ... and Ha! at Shepard's butt being popular on Asari sites. And the bumblebee armor. XD

You almost make me like EDI. Almost. :)

Love it. You have a really nice, flowing writing style, and your Shepard is quite an interesting cookie. :-) Tough, but not invulnerable. God, the throwaway detail about losing an eye during the colony attack... :-o

Love the chatter between her and EDI. And the various photos they scrolled through before finding the right one... Just brilliant! Thanks for writing and sharing.

Very nice. I though I was the only one whe didn't like Thomas Kinkade's pictures. Thanks for a good story.

That was priceless! Thank you for sharing!

Nice, makes sense too. I think I like this better than the idea that Cerberus put it there, which is kind of stalker-creepy. Well done!

Way to go Sage, it's beautiful. I like how you think. Write some more.

Really a great story :)

I never had really given it much thought as to how that picture got into Shep's cabin, I just assumed she had found it in the files and put it there. You're take on it is far better :D

Loved all the posterior comments too )

Ha! I really liked this, it was cute and funny, and a little sad at the end. I loved your Shepard, and your explanation for the picture made perfect sense. You should write more!

This is awesome, Sage. I love it!

That was wonderful... I love your EDI/Shep interaction. Hee! And I can't imagine any of my Shepards being particularly enamored of Kinkade either. :D (And awww... poor Shepard, all alone. *sniffles* Nice EDI, to find her a picture.)