edward violated their privacy twice ? he needs to die!

no, i would never forgive her.

MarshMALLOWS
Jesus F. Christ. Microsoft word has autocorrect! Totally done with this

Should HAVE not should of
Would HAVE not would of
Could HAVE not could of...
It’s so simple. I’m not sure why anyone would get something so incorrect repeatedly.
SHOULD’VE short for should HAVE not “of”
It’s really disturbing to read the mistake over and over and over again.

Edward has totally lost the plot if he thinks Bella will let him even touch her. she's a fully mated vampire and does not want him! and jasper will rip his dick off.

do vampires not know how to knock on a door? or that a closed bedroom door means the occupants want privacy?

why don't they call the volturi? isn't it against the law to turn children?

their all vampires for god's sake and will live forever.! why are they so impatient to here bella's story?

"Good...now tell me who the fuck you ran into? It better not be my bitch ex-wife!

At first I liked this one better than the last. But it seems impossible for Jasper to be written respectfully in your world. A gentleman would never call someone he'd loved a bitch, and no matter how much you dislike someone else's intellectual property (ie Alice) does not give you the right to sh*t all over it. Have some respect.

It was a very well written story. I love the Major and Bella together. Thank you for sharing.

It's actually very funny.

Killing her would have been much more humane.

I love this more every time I read it!

Amazing story

this was a wild ride love this thanks for sharing