Reviews for Ephemeral Hue
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
Update!
Sheherazade17 chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
I grovel at your feet and command you to continue!
Suru730 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I really enjoyed reading this chapter! Keep up the good work.
trashaccount2 chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
This is great! Hope is quite in character. :)
SoDapper chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
Hope still sucks and i hope he dies and he "goes to blazes."

But keep updating :D
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
omg that was soooo guuu. it was the bestest thing i've ever read in my short fifi life. it puts my work to shame. keep writing. can't wait for the next chapiter
teh-Rii chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I love it so far!
Butterfly-Muse chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
I really enjoyed this so far.

I have to admit, I wasn't all that surprised but then again you could have set up for something completely different to happen at the end as well.

I think your writing is excellent, slight grammar errors here and there but nothing that really stands out that'll make the reader frustrated.

I like this journal entry thing you have going on with the story.

And whenever you can, I'll like to see the next chapter!

Hope you keep it up!

Alpha
BluEriccson chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
wait, is this AU? because Hope is 14, not 17. otherwise really good
Lady Midday chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
Very nice! :)

Doesn't matter if you take a long time to update. Rather that, than having a rushed chapter, right?

By the way, I don't think Snow's that out of character. At least, not to the point that it is actually bothering me.

During this chapter, I was actually thinking Snow was taking Hope to some stripping bar or something. XD He emphasized "Eighteenth birthday'' after all.

Well, I'm sorry to say I'm a bit short on time right now, so no criticism. :(

Lady Midday
Daedulas chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
I like this. This could be as a result of age, but Hope seems different when compared to the game. He's more...cynical? I cant think of the right word at the moment, but he is definitely different.
pleebloo chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
hi harriii to lazy to log in LOL I LIEK EEEEET! can't wait for the next chapter. keep going! and can't wait for your snow is a bum sotry too LOLOLOL KAY BYE ima touch your feet watch out :DDDD
SoDapper chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
cool story bro.

ps. hope sucks :D
Aoi Hyoudou chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Ah. So Hope is writing down all the stuff the group went through in his journal. Interesting.

I couldn't imagine Snow writing. He's a bit an...you know but anyways, Snow can't be a writer XD
RustKnight chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
Very interesting. He does come off as too smart for his age as if everything is worth pondering.(I think it is fun.)
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