| Reviews for The Chaos Theory |
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Guest chapter 5 . 3/30/2019 I know this story has been abandoned for a few years, but if you're still out there, just know that someone likes it and would like you to continue |
Faery66 chapter 5 . 4/19/2017 Hope to read more soon. D |
Yazmin chapter 5 . 7/11/2016 Update plz |
Blueist-Silk chapter 5 . 5/29/2016 update pleasee ,,,, pwettyy pweeaaseee... |
LightnigJack chapter 5 . 12/25/2015 OH! me like-y |
LightnigJack chapter 3 . 12/25/2015 ...hmmmmmm |
isahbellah chapter 5 . 10/2/2011 Okay,when I read the summary I wasn't expecting NONE of this gem stuff...but I gotta say: it's more exciting LOL And I get it that this is an AU fic,but in my opinion,Happosai is a little bit ~~less~~ pervy than I'm used from what I've gathered,Ryoga isn't lost at all!WHAT HAPPENED TO MY ETERNAL LOST BOY?HAS HE FOUND HIS WAY? But either way,I'm really liking your fanfic!And I'm a little bit disappointed that it only has 5 chapters and 14 reviews :\ you deserve way more reviews!And I NEED MORE CHAPTERS.I WON'T REST UNTIL YOU UPDATE THIS FANFICTION.I WILL BE ANNOYING IS A WARNING! Can't wait for the next chappie! :) |
yue no rei chapter 5 . 7/25/2011 This sounds so fun haha. I like the style of your writing here and hmm.. I guess I'm rather most curious about Ranma's older brother... |
egoserenade chapter 5 . 7/21/2011 I like the prologue (foreshadowing) and chapter 3 in particular. The rest is a bit confusing at this point, but it looks like it's shaping up to be interesting. |
DaisukiFox chapter 4 . 7/18/2011 I'm reviewing for this chapter because I already reviewed for 5, since you had that AU note and removed it. And I think I can help you with your fanfiction. You seem to be doing pretty good... it's just lacking a little. Okay... you seem to take away some key elements that people like about the characters and often forget a few things. Not to mention, you forget that Ranma uses slang and sometimes use words that Ranma wouldn't use. And sometimes stray away from what Ranma and Ryoga would actually do. This is why I'm going to help you in our group project, I'll finish it tomorrow and hand it to ya', sound good? |
DaisukiFox chapter 5 . 7/15/2011 Ryoga no Teishu? That's the project we were working on. I totally forgot about that... if you want I can write chapter 2 up. |
DarkRubberNeck chapter 4 . 12/22/2010 A weird but very interesting story. Hope to read more soon _ |
Kichira chapter 1 . 12/7/2010 Really good! I definitely like the idea of the Ranma cast depicted as more normal and believable individuals, and without the overwhelming 'superpowers' that separate them in many ways from the rest of us. I also am a big fan of the Ryoga x Ranma-chan pairing, including Ranma as both genders if you happen to go that route. Can't wait to read more. |
Diren chapter 3 . 6/20/2010 Ranma and Ryoga have a special type of friendship they always argue and compete. This is a sign of emotional love for his friend but the whole problem is that they are physically the boys and this love is not manifested in a physical sense, they just remain good friends. But when such relationships occur between a man and a woman, it usually ends with marriage. And what happens if one of my friends will turn into a girl? They have a reason to marry. I look forward to the continuation. |
DaisukiFox chapter 3 . 6/7/2010 I have to say... great story. Although the build up might need some work. Anywho, great job and hope you actually finish this one. :D It's cute... their interaction. |