The fanfict was great! Amazing! I'll be waiting for the next update!

I really want to compliment your writing, it's fantastic. It's witty and at times funny, and at others just dreamy and beautiful.

Chap. 13 made me weep like an idiot.

It's especially impressive given your age.

I'm glad that you decided to stay with writing even with having to deal with Life. Don't let it get you down, everything we survive help shape the people we become. I've been there myself.

Hope your well, and will totally keep checking for updates.

Liz

I loved it ;D Continue? Pretty please?

You can't imagine how glad I was to hear something from you again.

And don't worry, if your will is strong enough you'll make it. Just believe in it, and everything will be fine in the end. Good luck!

And I'm curious about the revised story/new chapters. :D

Your style of writing is really interesting to read, and the characters are, well, in-character. Nice storyline, update soon plz

:)

Dont be sorry! If you're alright then that's what matters. :)

YAY!UPDATE SOON~! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!

no worries my friend~

Please continue to write I can't wait for the next chapters keep writting

pshaw this stories kickass

i wouldn't change a thing

and i know it doesn't really help

coming from a total stranger but

imma say it any way

seriously your a really great writer

don't worry too much about the little things

they pass and looking back they're what make us human

besides it'll give you hives

... or so i'm told

tehe

honestly though

we got your back

you're OWNING this story

with love,

that was really good

it was silently amazing

thank you

with love,

hisana just passed away already..uh...*sad*

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter

Ah, yes, the sexual tension starts to be alieviated. Really, you've done a good job of building a life for Rukia, then inserting Ichigo into it. From everything anyone does, it's like Ichigo is just there, interrupting the flow of what should be happening, changing things. I'm excited for the next update.

You managed to make me sign up here just because I wanted to leave you a review.

I do not write myself and don't really know much about writing, so I can't really give much constructive criticism, but I do know that I seriously love your writing style.

I love all of the analogies you bring in, and the humour in this in general is great.

But I adore all the angsty and sensitive moments as well.

You give the impression that you truly know what you're writing about, and that makes all of the story even more "realistic".

And you keep all of them completely in character in my opinion. (Except maybe Hisagi, because he just wouldn't act like that in Bleach since he's not really friends with Rukia, but there's not helping that in this story anyway, haha.)

I've enjoyed every bit of this amazing story so far, keep it up!