You keep on sayin things that either aren't True or already happend. like when Bella says she cant read Ness mind,but she has the power to do anything remember (well nit anything but that wish power )and there are many more u need to fix that

i thought her parents died yet you have mentioned renee and grampa charlie how?

how does she know charlie and when did Edward leave her

Great chapter! Please update soon!

I think u should have all of the girls Bella,Alice,and the 2 brides go pick dresses have something happen and a wedding and babies! Something happen like a kidnapping or a fight to end with a happily ever a after

If u have written anything else tell me what it is love ur work

aww loved it!

Wow. Nice story. That was truly an awesome chapter. I needed that lack of drama type of ending after reading so many stories full of drama, lol. Nice job.

i think it would be cool if you did do the wedding but maybe have someone interupt it or something and have the girls have kids...

maybe involve another enemy for the cullens... like someone getting kidnapped...

I dont think it sucked I loved it :)

I loved this story when did you write it? It was awesome I loved it!

sincerely,alyssa:)

loved it!Write more soon!

Nice chapter there. As always.

I meant to write this earlier, but I got caught up in some other things.

Nice chapter.

Lol.

All of these chapters are compiled very nicely. And of course, they are humorous.

aww loved it! write more soon!

I don't mind OOCnes for one, because it makes the characters more original than they were in the series, and authors on the site should have the right to change them up as they please! Otherwise all stories on fanfic would be so BORING. So thank you!