This is awesome! and it's soooooooooooooooooooooooo KAWAII! PLEASE UPDATE!

um,i like it i REALLY do.(speasaly that crona is a girl :D)
but you are going really fast. but i gues you have to or it will turn into a book...i tend to do that.
i have heard of KID being a cat but crona, omg so cute:) so thanks for doing this.
you should have discrided her, is she all pink? usally(here we go with gender but you called it a she so, we good.) fem cats have more than one colored fur,just btw.
love the idea.

YEAH RIGHT! FASTER MY ASS you better update this RIGHT NOW or ohoohho your GONNA GET IT (which is a lie) but no really ARE U DEAD OR SOMETHING i think you are BUT if ur not...update this ALOT of innocent (right) sweet (pffft) and kind (HA) peaple are waiting for this fic since LOOONG so atleast if your not interested in this couple or wont continue PLEASE let us know (im preety sure your dead)

So cute when will you finish it

Please continue

that is dump as hell

UPDATEEEEEE ITT NOWWWW

awesome and cute! good job

AHHHHHH! I love this. It hasent been updated in a while and Im wondering if your still on here? If you are are you going to keep going? I hope so :)

:D oh c'mon I want more!

Nice Story Story BTW :) T-T When's The Next Chapter! T-T

IT'S BEEN THREE YEARS! D: T-T

Awww, poor Crona! She just can't catch a break, can she?

OMG! Poor, poor Crona. Will the torment ever end? Lol.
Patty is evilz.
Let's hope Kid says no, otherwise Crona might hate him foreverz! Lol.

Lmol! Awww, poor Crona. She's gonna get soaked with water and tortured! Poor Crona kitty. Other than a few grammatical errors and misspelled words there really is no problem, though I feel this was somewhat rushed.