Reviews for Elegy of a Fallen Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This some good reading. |
![]() ![]() This is pretty interesting. However, I would like to point out that mortified means embarrassed, and I'm pretty sure you meant something else in the sentence you used it in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems a little cliche, also child services would take custody of Danny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back, and thanks for the new, if short chapter. (if only because at the end of 12 Loon says the banks heist was going to already have happened by the beginning of this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raven's magic has failed to hold beings with less strength than Danny, so I kinda doubt it would do more than slow him down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a well written story! I love the plot. Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha love it. You've done a great job with your writing. Yes there's spelling errors and what not but as a whole, I think you're doing an awesome job. Your ideas and plots for this story alone are very entertaining and draw me in to keep reading, your humor and matching of the titans personalities are great. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() It is a cool story but I just hate Dani |
![]() ![]() ![]() You lost me at ''he went goth''. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cyborg is made of depleted promethium... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alright people who killed Alteris's muse? Its almost been a year. Quick somebody resurrect that muse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well crap gotta hate mind control. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Raises eye brow) |