this story is awesome!

[ didn't feel like logging in xD]

hmmm a few words? Amazing, lemony goodness, funny, and I loved the end xDDD

Love it

I actually AM craving pancakes now. Which sucks, because I never have pancakes (I'm one of those horrible monsters who doesn't really care for pancakes). :( oh well, at least I read your awesome story. That definitely makes up for the whole pancake thing. :)

great! it was awesome! XD

haha awesome...poor ami though.

Amazing!, this story is very well written (o). I can't believe it's your first fanfic. You're professional!(_-).

I was just thinking about this: it's pretty unrealistic. I guess Amu's going to have awful morning-breath for not brushing her teeth at night and terrible, crusty make-up (let's all hope she's not wearing mascara). Plus there was no after-sex pee for either of them. Whoops. I just wanted to say that here because I'm too lazy to edit it into the author's note. 'Kay. Bye now.

Nice...and i think that adding Ami in the end wasn't such a bad idea _

Hiya

It a great story and realy well writen.

Ah poor Ami, That girls not gonna look at her sister the same way again.

Oh and you were worng... Ok so its only 2am but still i could go for some pancakes!

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Mazz

i liked it, very good job! and p.s. luv the part at the end, "hi ikuto. pancakes?" ROFL I don't know why, but I was laugh'n so hard

I love it . I'd like to read more tho

That was pretty good.

that scene about ami was a cute finish

Nice. Very descriptive. ;)