LMAO ooh! ooh! now I want a series about this version of ATLA! Please!

Love the friendship between Zuco and Toph :)

This is definitely a good chapter. It would explain a lot about how the shirshu changed and Jun's own actions to her.

In general, it's a really good fic. You write really well and have good ideas.

This is definitely an interesting way of describing Kuruk's battle. You wrote his and Ummi's deaths beautifully.

This is hilarious. I love how you mentioned that Zuko only laughs twice in the series, while still being entirely in character. Also you did an excellent job of accepting sixteen year old boys are, with a couple of exceptions, generally fairly immature when not immediately in danger.

This is definitely a good story to tell. The image of a child!Kyoshi defending her cat-bird against what was never an attack is adorable.

This is adorable and hilarious. You portrayed the Sukka dynamics perfectly, and showed what they have in common - lack of sense.

I love how you wrote the family dynamics. We know that Katara and Sokka had heard stories about the Avatar, but we never saw what they were. You did it perfectly.

This is really well done. I like how you explain so much of his current emotions while relating it around the specific theme of his hands.

This is incredibly well done. I felt tense as I fell just as completely for the claim that they'd help him, and then was caught off balance by the poison. It's an excellent piece of writing.

This is definitely an interesting take!

This is splendid characterisation. Your portrayal was fantastic.

This is great. Chit Sang's past was such a mystery and I like your interpretation.

I'm back and this is a beautiful chapter to return to. I love it. This is entirely in character and absolutely gorgeous.

This is absolutely gorgeous.
And I really need to go to bed. But I love your work.