Oooh, you are going to kill me! I want more!
your writing style is awesome, please continue!

Hope to read more soon.

D

I'm really excited to see how this is all going to go down! The mystery deepens and more people are getting hurt, and the intensity between Ai and Ren is growing more and more tangible. I'm really happy you updated and I can't wait to read more from you :)

My patience has been rewarded!

Okay so, I am super intrigued and impressed!
Like the other reviewer mentioned, this does remind me of "Another" in that everyone is dying and I presume Ai is responsible or something in that line of thinking.

Also, I already feel the chemistry between Ai & Ren growing, or maybe another word could be intensity. I love how flustered Ren is and how calm Ai appears to be, I'm interested to see how their relationship will grow.

And no, I have no idea what is happening, but I really want to find out.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more!

Mia (:

I feel like instead of the this being HellGirl, it's more like the anime Another where people die left and right because of one person.
Seems interesting, I can't wait to see how far the relationship between Ai and Ren will go.

Hey (:

Still waiting for an update...

*crawls back into cave*

This is really interesting. How the story build up and the suspense that lingers around. And i love how Ren is changing from being indifferent to caring. Im juz dying to see how this will unfold and how's the development of these two characters. Also, that kouchou... He's a mystery too. Hmmmm~

I love what you've done so far can't wait for more updates kepp up the good work!

Whoa. This is really interesting. I know what you mean about not updating. My own fics just keep piling up without one ever being marked as 'completed'. But that's the beauty of being alive. You can always start over.. or in this case, continue where you left off.

For somone who said
''i'm working on the next chapter as we speak.''
''i'm not letting this fic die.'' and
'' I know it seems like i'm updating only once a year''
You oddly enough havn't updated in over a year... :)

Amazing story! Please post more :) Very nice writing style too. You're great!

wow that was really good please make more chapters and im guessing takanaga is the guy that said "who's gonna die now ai-chan"or something like that and wakata is one of the people that was with him you dont have to answer just curious and as i said please make more chapters :)

whoa i wantto see the next chatper nya so please up-date nya

Update. Update. Update. COME ON! UPDATE! I'm really liking this story and if you don't update it, I'll be angry! Update!

-sketch

I really like this story so far and hope you upload the next chapter soon