This was a good place to end! It’s the end of one journey and the start of another! I loved Harry’s personal journey and liked George’s part in it too!

This was a great story, I loved it!

Wow :)

Yummy!

WOW CRAP!

Good

I so very much loved this story. I would so like you to write more.

Hmm, story is okay so far, especially how they drank, played party games and the scene afterwards.

On a side note, I find it hard to believe that Harry Potter, mastering Patronus in 3rd year, DA teacher in his school years, tri wizard champion, vanisher of Voldemort, 1 out of 6 who battled 12 top Death Eaters in the DOM, Auror trainee, etc. would fall so easily to 1 (or 3) Death Eaters. Besides, what the fuck 'caught in the crossfire'? Can't they tell each other apart? Most likely the 4 common curses fired in the battle would have been Stunner ( unharmed), Killing Curse (dead), Cutting Curse ( served limbs, dead) or Bombarda ( blown to bits, dead). With what must he have been hit in the battle to require so long bed rest with potions without lasting damage and why was it fired in the first place?
Whatever, for the sake of your fiction I will buy that he 'was caught in the crossfire' and Hermione must nurse him.

Surely an interesting first chapter.

But Harry is not the only OC in your fiction, Ron too. The Ron I know would call Luna 'Loony' instead of marrying her, he would have slept with Hermione and wouldn't have the emotional capatility to be so a caring/understanding/good friend.

I do hope at some point in time you take up this world and go further. The way you have left the story it begs to be written. That being said this fic was very well done and as with 'Triangle' I found myself enjoying it immensely. I think the way you write the characters is good even with them being OOC at times. I liked the way you show them not being the perfect all together characters some write but flawed and with rough edges. I liked the progression between Harry and Hermione and how their relationship evolved and even Ron falling out of love with Hermione and finding it with Luna who completes him in this story. I think Harry living his life as he was using it as a crutch to express his own self pity was something that he needed to get to where he is with Hermione at the end of the story. Then the way it ended where he finally gave his heart completely to the only woman he could and then come to realize that something he had staring him in the face his whole life since he was eleven is the one thing he really needed but only had to grab it. I know that sounds confusing but that is how I see it. Now with having a stability in his life he can live as he should have before, how Dumbledore wanted him to, with love.
Again great fic and I thank you for writing it.

It would be amazing if you wrote a sequel to this story!

Well done. Story pacing was nice. I always wanted to hit next to see what was happening next. Ron / Hermione relationship was handled well. The angst between Harry and Hermione was also brilliant. Often I feel that the angst is really 'forced' into the situation just to give the story some interest. In this case that was definately not true. Well done.

Pathetic

nice

Tack för en otroligt sexig och upphetsande berättelse, mer av deta tack :)