that was very emotional

This was amazing, simply amazing. :)

Yukihara and Yuka...so sweet and sad. I love it (even though I feel kind of sad now) and I like your song choice. Although I had to go looking for the song on my computer because I couldn't remember the lyrics...

Who else did you have in mind for your collection? There's a song by Hoobastank called 'Running Away'that always reminds me of Narumi and Yuka...so sad and painful.

Anyway, I'll look forward to whatever you come up with. Keep it up and good luck!

Fria~ You were tipsy? :O

Hahaha! If I were in your shoes, I probably wouldn't be able to write anything. Haha!

Anyway, Ah... I love the feel of this chapter. Yuka's strength is inspiring. I mean, look at her. Her beloved sensei left her with a child and she's a mere teen herself yet, she continued to live her life without regrets. She didn't even blame Yukihara. Yes, she did say he lied but she understood why he had to do that. She matured a great deal after what happened. Even if fate seemed to betray her, she didn't loose hope. And indeed, Mikan became her hope, her light and her salvation.

Oh okay, I'll end it here. I'm blabbering. XD

Love it! More please?

Louise~

Fria-chan! Oh my, getting tipsy could make you write something like this? I'll drink everyday! xDD

Aww. I love this chapter. :'( It's so... inspiring, again. Make more chapters for this. :D

-SITS/Kate-chan

This is so ... inspiring. :) I'm sorry for your lost. But I'm sure that she's happy wherever she is right now. :)

I love this song. :) And I love the POV you used.

I'm kind of .. speechless. I just love this. :D

-Kate-chan

Wow.. Okay.. so first of all, I loved the second person point of view. [:

It seemed as if Natsume's conscience was talking to him.. Not exactly, but I hope you get what I mean.. gah.. _

Anywayss.. Yea.. :P

Second of all, I love this song. [:

So yea. :D Some parts are a little deep and I like that. [: It was pretty serious, but at the same time really heartfelt. I love it and I can't wait to read more. [:

chinkyyy~

Yay, second review.

This fic reminds me of my fic, To My Four-Leaf Clover, because of the second person point of view and the repeating paragraphs at the start and end. X)

Anyway, I always did like stories written in the second person, so that's plus points for this story in itself. It's also nice to read about the change that happens to Natsume upon Mikan's entrance into his life, no matter how many times or how many ways it's been presented, because in a sense I guess it's true.

Not to mention the fact that I like this song.

My teacher actually wants this as his funeral song. Not any other sad song, but this one. He likes Linkin Park a lot.

Anyway, take care, Eline, and I'm sure that, to the person who knew your friend, a part of her will remain.

tht was nice...i think u described Natsume's feeling quite well _

although i think it would be better in either 3rd or 1st person point of view...but it's all up 2u

gud job though!