A real gem, this must have been the 3rd or 4th time I've read it, but always gets me.

That was a well written, and well executed, story.

Fuck. You.
My heart is racing, my throat feels weird, my eyes are burning, and just fuck you man...
Damn... This is another one of those stories that I won't be forgetting for years... Damn.

ok i love on four legs. i would love to see a sequel some day about the aftermath of it and rons death. maybe have ron actually shown respect by shamans for hurting and driving off the skin walker or the schools reaction the the death of most of the cheerleaders and how do they explain what happened.

An amazing all round story that i have read and re read on multiple occasions. one of my all time favorite writings. not just a fan fic but a piece of great writing.

O.O

huh. interesting.

This was extremely well written and frighteningly accurate. I am a mythology buff and you hit most if not all points when it comes to Skimwalkers.

Here is hoping that Ron finished the thing off, and personally, I feel that he has at least a shot for a few different reasons... even if it is unlikely we'll ever know for sure.

Ron mentioned a while back, about the power of sacrifice, of being willing to give up something in exchange for a boon/power... and one of the examples he used with the group was that of self-sacrifice to protect others. He had been trying to protect the group all through the night, doing his best, managing to get some cheap shots in, weakening/causing this thing pain.

And before it takes him, as dawn is about to come, he speaks a prayer from the culture it comes from and begins to do his best to at least take the thing down with him... even as the sun is about to rise. Still, the combination of prayer, Antheme's and dawn, along with the willing self-sacrifice (at least partially for the girl he loves)...

Who knows, maybe that would give him the extra mystical weight needed to finish it off.

And maybe, if they hurry, he can still be saved from the cusp of death? Or, if this things death would be felt, and among the tribes he would be... well, respected as one that even if he was a white man, managed to take this thing down.

That was crazy good, it had me on the edge of my metaphorical seat. Judging by the comments and date the story was made, you aren’t writing anymore. But if for some odd reason you see this comment, this is possibly one the best fics I have ever read. Great job. And if you could please make an accompanying fic or other such sequel.

this really deserves a stand-along fic from the perspectives of the others.

If only there was a way to contact you and ask about these unfinished gems.
Well, I'll take the hope path and maybe you'll come back some day to finish Ruinous and Beyond The Outer Gate Lies.
I'll forever be a fan.

Damn. I am at a loss for words. I have never read anything like this, and damn. This story was fucking amazing, and I'm honestly conflicted because I really loved the ending but I also want to know more. Damn.

damn man, but that ending though

Holy shit! This has been the most heart pounding piece of fiction that Ive read since Stephen King. Keep up the great work!