Reviews for The Protector
Seraphstrist chapter 15 . 11/26/2013
It seems to always be worth the wait with you. I admire the depth of thought you have put in your character. The way you explain her makes her stand as a true individual and someone those that read this, can relate to.

I started reading this long ago but was truely unable to review. Now that I can... well done. The last chapter was fine. You have good instinct with your writing... just continue the way you've been and you have nothin' to worry about. I look forward to your next chapter.
Clowny19 chapter 15 . 11/12/2013
Omg update again please!
saichick-Anna-Erishkigal chapter 15 . 10/30/2013
Enjoyed this 3:-)
Glad to see you back again...
AutumnKrystal chapter 15 . 10/30/2013
Happy anniversary! Now get back to writing, haha just kidding. To say I was expecting that when I checked my email... id be lying. But none the less I loved the chapter. Yes the cliffhanger was mean. I agree. Hope to read more soon!
ShiloCoulter chapter 14 . 11/28/2012
Yes!
KarlishaCullen chapter 14 . 11/25/2012
I say go for it! Looking forward to the next chapter(:
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
mature definatly but if i get out voted can i just have an outake?
itricky chapter 14 . 11/13/2012
Thanks for the update. havent rad anything from this genre an a whilee and i miss it. i think ill have to reread it ral quick actually cause i was kinda fuzzy on what was going on. Loved it anyway u rock
OptimisticTheory chapter 14 . 11/4/2012
Mature, Mature! I vote mature! Shame the chapters are so short 'cause the writing is so good. Continue soon!
Guest chapter 14 . 10/31/2012
...hmmmm...my vote definately goes to more mature stuff. Cos I'm a perv like that :D
silvermist1116 chapter 14 . 11/1/2012
Glad to see you're still alive. I can't wait for the next chapter. Go ahead and write a lemon. You have the rating as M right? Put to good use.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/30/2012
Go naughty. That would be good.
saichick-Anna-Erishkigal chapter 14 . 11/1/2012
Ah! Loved the big reveal!

I'm all for explicit smut, but you should try to scope out the general age of the people who are following your story. If you've got a lot of younger readers, you may want to skirt that fine line of insinuation and a bit of raciness without getting too explicit so you don't make young ears burn. If, on the other hand, you've got a bunch of dirty old farts like me following your story, go as smutty as you like. Just be sure to change the rating.
AutumnKrystal chapter 14 . 10/30/2012
Mature, mature, mature! :D
ForEver-A-DayDreamer chapter 13 . 9/21/2012
Omg ! Update soon plzz lol
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