This is a faschinating world, though the concept seems terribly dark. For a reader it seems that there cannot be good ending to this tale, which makes the reading a hard experience. On the other hand, the blatand racism reminds that of the happenings in America concerning end of 19th century. All in all, the story is intriquing and I am wondering what exatly Hiko did to Kenshin and who exatly is Kenshin to Hiko.

Keep going! I am starting to love it now! :)

AMAZING!

I've read a lot of different RK plots and settings, but this is one of the most bizarre! In a good way I mean! Like, its so different it really left an impression and I'll be able to remember it quite easily and all... Please don't take it the wrong way! The plot just got really interesting (oh I knew there was SOMETHING different about Kenshin) and I hope my review is somewhat encouraging.

Until next chapter then!

- Syra :)

Oh my gosh! I am on pins and needles here! You certainly know how to keep your readers hooked. I can't wait for the next one.

Really like the story!

I'm glad you've returned! :D So, Kenshin was like the natural mutation that inspired Hiko in his work? That gave him what he needed to make the creations? Great chapter!

great update... seems that soujiro was in an accident too... looks like they all are in the same hospital and things are getting a little interesting... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!

Great story, Hope you update soon cant wait to see whats up with ken

I really enjoyed the last two chapters, great job on them :)

i'm really enjoying this story. I'll write more on this when I'm more awake.

so basically 'creations' are all human just genetically altered and reanimated - something like miracle max in 'princess bride' but not as good since wesley's memories were intact as 'creation' memories have been lost.

"he's not dead, just -mostly- dead!"

glad you're back - yu-gi-oh was okay but i couldn't really get into it that much - to each his/her own.

there's a really good anime that i have been watching - 'eden of the east' - very intriguing and funny at times.

i wonder if it's unusual that whenever i read or see something i imagine 'rk' or 'iy' characters in the parts - *scratches!head*

Wow, where was I when you updated this story? I was so surprised when I found out that there was a chapter nine! Now I really do hope that you'll update soon, since this is only getting more interesting :)

Great chapter! Sano's experience was heart-wrenching...and it did warp him. And as for Kenshin...he's a bad kid, lying like that! It's weird to see Kenshin being dishonest... But then, he doens't completely believe himself to be dishonest, he just knows other will see it that way. I'm glad Misao's getting all the info she needs now. That's a good revelation. I noticed some grammatical errors and typos in this chapter, but other than that, it was great! Can't wait until the next one! :)

O_O! i can't wait!

great update... seems that lots of things are happening at once... sanosuke being suspicious about kenshin... megumi doing her job but trying to figure things out... kaoru getting better and having a serious talk with sano... misao learning more things... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!