Nooooo this is so interesting! Plz keep going

I love this idea. Keep going definatly. I would love to see how this turns out

You should keep going with this idea, it sounds pretty good so far.

I really do like the idea of Harley with Crane, though it would probably change her characterization completely. Also, you may want to slow down the pacing. It's a little fast.

It's not bad, and I'm interested to see where it goes. I didn't notice too many problems as far as grammar was concerned, at least not any that jumped out at me. I'm not sure about Harley's characterization yet, but I'm willing to read more before passing any real judgement.

That being said, the thing that bothered me the most was what you said about sign language. Sign language DOES have a grammar, it just is more spatial than the temporal sort of word order that spoken/written languages have. I don't know any form of sign language myself, but from what others have told me and from what I've studied in linguistics, there is definitely a grammar to sign language. If there weren't it would be more or less incomprehensible, just a jumble of signs.