ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FANFICS I'VE READ. I can't believe I haven't come across you before! You have an amazing carefree way of writing and I hop it evolves into something more. Well done! Congrats!

Oh, because of course a family of pure-blood bigots like the Malfoys ALWAYS goes to Muggle ice cream parlors. Really? You couldn't come up with a realistic premise for a story?

I know this is my first review, but this story is so sweet and this chapter is making me gush, and my weak and lovesick heart melt

I love the plot and the characters. What I most dislike are the misspelled words and grammatical errors but I loved it a lot to continue till the very end. Thanks for making and finishing the story. Hope you make a new one soon. Please check on the proper use of your vs you’re, they’re and there and the like.

I did like this fanfic overall. However, there are a lot of spelling mistakes, which made it harder to read compared to usual ones. I hope that in the future, this will be edited and revised with proper spelling so then future readers won’t have as much trouble reading it.

I feel like you're adding things at random that arent explained at all n this is one big Mary sue. Now shes pregnant... I think u also need a beta. I like thw plot but it seems like all this extra stuff like the oc's and frank etc is getting everything mixed up

I dont understand who zack is or whats going on with her fam... I bet its explained later. Just wanted you to know it was really random

I don't get it. Why does Harry want to use the floo? Sirius has a bloody book that is connected to Harry's, why not bloody use it? And in this case he shouldn't have forgotten it, like with the mirror in canon, because he bloody often uses it and everyone in the bloody Order has one.

Another thing is that your Voldemort is strange. How did he meet Amethyst? From what I gather (mostly from Portrait/Dumbledore interaction in this chapter) he pulled a James while Amethyst was at Hogwarts, but that doesn't make any sense because Riddle was there bloody fifty years ago when the Chamber was last opened. Also it makes no sense that she was the reason he hated muggleborns, by the time he would have met her he already should have become a monster.

it was so sweet how Draco confessed his feeling for her. we had so much sweetness for this pair, yet the end of this chapter is a sad one. a friend died.

waht? who is this Amethyst? who is this Myra? are Lauren, Ame, and Myra sisters?

so who is this Brianne?

what the heck? how old is Mione ? Her father is forcing her to marry? what?

awee. what was Draco trying to tell Hermione before Harry interrupted them?

their moment of the ice was cute.

aweee how Draco is trying to apologize to Hermione is so cute