a sequel would be amazing...just saying but for real- this is a beautiful story!

I Love the idea, L carrying a gun and being bold for his intentions for Light. there were missing, such as where BB got the idea L had feelings for Light in the first place... but it doesn't matter now. characters were mostly according to original and I love the way they've become friends. also adding French was really brilliant. thanx for the hard work.

Haha L thought coffee meant they arecdating so cute :)

Nice job. You are extremely talented.
-S

Oo!, oo!, I do!, I do!
( prefer L as seme that is:D:D )

This is simply a amazingly written fanfic! I finished the whole story in one day, I could not put it down! I absouluty love the ending, it wasn't too abrupt or drawn out. You have big plans ahead of you and your writing, because it's simply amazing.
Mika-chan

I-I can't b-breathe; it's too cute; I'm l-literally crying... Ohhhhh dear, t-the feels are g-getting to me...
*drowns in my own tears*

Such an amazing story, very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this.
2 questions.
Why was BB murdering orchestra members?
Why did Light think his instrument was 'off'?
Again, great story :)

I think I'm in love. Although BBs death kind of felt abrupt and Matsuda was kind of forgotten, and the poor cake suffered alone.

Teehee i loved your story :D The ending was soo cute!

aww! it was such a cute story!

i prefer L as a seme as well even though light has such a dominant personality.

Lovely! XD BB is a really fascinating character, but L and Matt and Mello and Near are so much more important... XD

Oh my god. Mello as a roommate for Light is the best thing ever! XD

I luv this story everything was perfect it's like you were born to write deathnote fanfics. Everyone was in character the plot line was good, the sex scenes were better :p. I recently added this as one of my favorite stories. Thank you for writing this I can tell your a talented writer so please don't stop writing. best of luck.