Aww, how sweet!

Awwww. I love these two, especially your protrayal of their relationship. Very nice. :)

I liked it, Icheb was in character and so was Naomi (actually probably more so than she was in the show).

Thunder

Gah, I almost got an aneurism from the shere amount of sugary-cuteness... XD

I liked this very much. I think Naomi would act like this. She may think she is a big girl but she still love Neelix a lot and miss him. I think you done a great job writing Icheb as well.

Hello,

I really liked this. As others have said, I was surprised that we weren't shown Naomi's reaction to Neelix leaving. I like Icheb; he has his difficulties understanding normal interactions, but noticeably still acts younger than Seven of Nine. He may be a Borg kid, but kids need each other.

Good writing,

The PreacherMan

So cute! I always found it strange that Neelix and Naomi never had a real 'goodbye' scene, considering he was the closest thing she had to a father or a very close uncle. I wish he'd never left, to be honest, and that his new family had joined Voyager. Anyway, you got the characters spot on!

That is so sweet! I'd never thought of him comforting Naomi and I really like it. :)

Emma

I loved theses little progressive glimpes, this is how a true relationship between them would grow. It would be small moments as the grow from childhood to adulthood, from friendship to love. Keep them coming!

Ah, sweet, Lady Dudley :) I love how vulnerable and eager to please Icheb is. Nice little friendship fic!

Aaaawwwwwww D totally adorable!

~charl~