| Reviews for Fifty Shots Through The Heart |
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ming toh chapter 1 . 9/28/2015 Thank you for your fabulous short stories! I especially like the dancing one. "I don't. Never said I couldn't." that's a perfect touch! totally mamoru style |
Calantha S chapter 1 . 6/17/2015 These were extremely well written! All of your characters were portrayed perfectly as well. I will re read this many times - thank you! The short skirt one made me chuckle. :) |
Rikka-tan chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 This was s-so... *speechless* Love every bits of it! XD *waiting patiently for the next ten prompts* |
Thewindsofsong chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 That last oneā¦lol. Are you going to continue this? |
ivyknightfire chapter 1 . 4/11/2012 Really funny and good! Don' t give up! |
evilteddybear chapter 1 . 9/16/2011 Really cute. Especially Mamoru getting upset at Haruka's short skirt and the teenaged boys. I look forward to the next chapter. |
utterlyheartbroken chapter 1 . 9/11/2011 Its amazing! I cannot wait until the next update ) |
Tommyboy1331 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010 Continue please! There aren't enough stories like this! |
Rizeru chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 Please please PLEASE...*goes down on both knees*...please write a series. It doesn't have to be long, but I love your style and what you do with the characters. I want more! *looks up with eyes full of pleading* |
Newbie GK chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 Lovely story. You did a fantastic job with the prompts. I think my favorite one is when Haruka is getting hit on by the teenage guys. Mamoru's reaction was hilarious! |
kittykathy chapter 1 . 6/26/2010 I looove it! More please? Lol, my favorite line in this chapter: "Going somewhere?" Igawa asked absently. "Yeah. I got a murder I need to commit." "Great. Bring me back a refill, will ya?" You're awesome ) |
Agent753 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010 ...nice! i like how you made haruka have a gun at the end! |
ShunKickShunKers chapter 1 . 6/17/2010 SO LOL this one! I love those drabbles! please go on? |
Trinity chapter 1 . 6/15/2010 I really enjoyed these little drabbles. Short and sweet, and so fun! Love Mamoru's voice. :D Jealous Mamoru is so durn grin-inducing. I feel sorry for the poor boys about to face his wrath, though. How would he go about scaring them away, hm? Well, the most likely scenario would be Mamoru's putting a hand on Haruka's shoulder and loom darkly like evil incarnate. XD That should be enough to scare away most teenage boys. If some with too much bravado are feeling suicidal, they might dare to stand their ground and say something stupid, at which point Mamoru will likely smirk very evilly indeed, possibly wrapping his arm around Haruka's shoulders, and perhaps a inch or two of gleaming, sharp steel would flash. Poor little boys. lol That one was my favorite, as you can tell, but I love the other ones, too, and the wedding one comes in a very close second. :D It's different than in "Bride," but it's perfectly fine as it can sure be a possible future. I can see it happening. One little note, though: I think you meant to use either "holster" or "garter" in the wedding one instead of "halter." Halter is the strap to hold a top up by wrapping around the neck. It'd be, uh, a bit difficult to hide a gun there, I imagine. ;) Looking forward to more! Please continue! |
deletedforpersonalreasons chapter 1 . 6/2/2010 *waves 'Fight On!' flag* P.S: This is the largest honour I ever give my favourite authors of my favourite stories. This is standing ovation material! |