Reviews for Kyle 10 Alien Force
Luke.SK chapter 33 . 4/10
Another cool chapter for Kyle and his team read.
Glad to see this is still going on, keep up the good work.
PeruAlonso chapter 33 . 4/9
Good work on this chapter. Welcome back.

Can't wait to see your versions of If All Else Fails and In Charm's Way next.

For If All Else Fails, I'd like to see Kayla go Inque. She uses her powers for the first time, and then, when it's raining, she calls Ben for help. After she changes back, Kayla gives Ben a "Thank you" kiss.
Omnitrix1 chapter 33 . 4/8
This chapter was cute.
The original “Single Handed” episode is one of my favorite season 3 episodes; it had a goofy premise and set-up, but it rolled with it and had fun! It also helped that when Ben was cut off from the Omnitrix, it allowed him to better showcase his improvisational skills (his street smarts basically), which is always nice to see, especially since later series tried emphasizing his goofball nature more and forgot he was competent without the watch. But that’s a different discussion.
Like I said, the chapter itself was cute. Just a simple, nice filler. I did like how Kyle was cut off from Ultima, as like the original episode, it allowed us to see him without the help of the fancy watch, it was interesting to see the characters react in this crisis (while also helping to establish some possible future conflict between Ali and Ultima), and finally, Kayla training Anubis was adorable, and if Omni ever returns, he is hugging that dog.
As such, cute chapter dude. Looking forward to the next.
Luke.SK chapter 32 . 12/11/2019
Neat Chapter.

Going to be interesting seeing what happens next. :)
Omnitrix1 chapter 32 . 12/6/2019
Finally finished.
Honestly? This chapter’s... Alright-ish.
It was kind of cool seeing Ben trying taking initiative to improve his standing, seeing Kyle gain more control of the Jubi beasts was cool, and the Vreedle brothers are always a treat. The stuff with Kayla was a bit strange in how quickly it came up, but I was alright with it, mostly just for Kayla’s reaction (and it gave me the funny mental image of Kayla going up to random Omnitrix users in Fanfiction and the shows and poking them ala “does this bug you” to see if she’ll fuse with them). My biggest complaints are, once again, some fights I felt were a little bit overblown (IT’S JUST OPINION, YOU CAN IGNORE IF YOU WANT), the stuff with Eggman helping the Vreedles was somewhat odd (still wondering how he got there), and while I like the Vreedles, they didn’t feel as important.
Overall, an alright-ish chapter. Looking forward to “Singlehanded”. That one is probably one the most amusing episodes in Alien Force Season 3.
PeruAlonso chapter 32 . 12/1/2019
This is marvelous. I like you put Ben in the limelight in proving he's not a sidekick.

Seeing Carl and Sandra appear wish they'd been in AF Season 3. Surprised they never reacted to Kevin's deformity.

After seeing Eggman in this chapter, I'd love to see him team up with Sunder, Vulkanus, and Charmcaster next.

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Xflasher02 chapter 32 . 11/26/2019
This episode was pretty cute. I loved everyone helping Ben out with that whole event. Great scenes of the characters just being characters.
Xflasher02 chapter 31 . 10/24/2019
Finally finished this chapter, and can I say True Kyle; very fun idea. Great work.
Pro FF Reviewer chapter 31 . 12/23/2018
Alright I know this story has been around for a while but your recent plot points have left me wanting to review this.

Honestly, it’s very obvious you are trying to make Kyle like Trey Sergauson. You even stole Makaveli’s entire Doppelgänger idea because you believed it’d work for you too. Not only is that plagiarism, it doesn’t even work for Kyle. Trey’s more care free and reckless attitude go well with his Doppelgänger status and makes his character unique. Kyle does not have that same attitude and honestly, the fact that you just added in blatantly that he’s a Doppelgänger like Trey really gives away the fact that you’re jealous of the character’s success. Kyle was already overpowered enough with the Tailed Beasts but you just had to copy. I know you have worked together before but that’s no reason to steal his whole character concept.
Omnitrix1 chapter 31 . 11/21/2018
Alright.
This was a fun chapter.
For starters, the stuff with doppelgänger abilities I’m kind of mixed on, since Kyle does have a lot of power as is, but I’m okay with it because:
1. The way it’s explained does show that’s a natural extension of Kyle’s powers.
2. He doesn’t have full control over it.
3. It’s planting the seeds for possible drama later, as Ultima is starting to alter Kyle’s genetic structure without his consent, something even he’s not fully okay with, and we’re starting to see more of Ultima’s dark side.
I also liked the drama with Kayla, as it actually felt legitimate considering her origin and her past.
Also, the stuff with Kazuma was alright. The final fight showed plenty of flashy powers, Kurama (always a plus if you ask me), and True Kyle was interesting to see. It also helped that Kazuma was the reason the war continued (I hated how the generals kept the war going so they could use as a scapegoat for all their other problems), and considering my own feelings toward “Simple”, I’m glad for that explanation.
Overall, fun chapter. Looking forward to the next.
PeruAlonso chapter 31 . 11/20/2018
This was a fun chapter to read. You even gave it a better ending than how the real episode ended.

All this time, Kayla was in the Null Void with Kevin and Argit? How sad it must've been for her. If she met you, Ali, Ben, Gwen and Max in a flashback, this would be fun to read:

(Kyle and Gwen kiss)
Kid Ben: Ew!
Kayla: Aw, how sweet! You and Gwen make a lovely couple.
Kid Gwen: That means a lot coming from you.
Kayla: I know you and I got off on the wrong foot but let's start over, shall we?

I love that you wrote her to be co-pilot with Kevin. Imagine her acting as a stewardess in K10:UA.

Loved her combined form of Starfire and Armodrillo. I'd love to see Ben hug her in that form.

I sense a love triangle with you, Ali, and Ultima.

For your version of Vreedle, Vreedle, here's what I'd like to see:

When you and the team talk about the Vreedles taking Ship away, Kayla pretends to be cool about it but in private, she cries her eyes out.

Shadow and Rouge take part in court and they congratulate you when Judge Domstol rules in favor of you.

A group hug with you, Kayla, and Ben (all as Upgrade) and Ship.

Thanks.
MakaveliX T chapter 31 . 11/20/2018
Super cool chapter, dude! I like that we got to see just how powerful Kyle would be had he and Kayla not been separated. A secret weapon that’ll be used later, I’m sure. I’m also wondering how Ali knows Kazuma. An ex-boyfriend perhaps? And Kyle being a Doppelganger was definitely a dope touch, although I think Trey would have something to say about who’s better, LOL. Great chapter once again, my guy. Can’t wait for the next one.
Ajiri Omariogha chapter 26 . 10/24/2018
Type your review here. This is awesome
Omnitrix1 chapter 30 . 9/21/2018
GOOD F-ING GOD! THAT FINAL FIGHT SCENE WAS LONG! VERY LONG!
Okay, got that out of my system. Anyway, this chapter was fine. I think the real strength in it was meeting SCP Kyle as, not only was he interesting as an Evil Kyle, but he was kind of tragic. From his perspective, he was ripped from his rightful place and was dumped into a universe where the people in power treated him like a science experiment. Yes, he met some nice people, but the fact that his freedom was all but gone, with how long he’s said he’s lived, and the amount of tragedy he’s seen, it makes sense why he’d snap. On top of that, his motivations are sympathetic and very tragic. All he wants is to go home and be with his loved ones again, which by itself isn’t a bad thing, but the fact that he ISN’T Kyle is what gets in his way. From his perspective, his life was stolen from him by this random stranger who looks like him, and the people who are supposed to be his friends are instead siding with, who he considers, a fake. Hell, you can practically feel his heart breaking every time he meets one of Kyle’s loved ones and they tell him, “You’re not the real Kyle.” As such, as both a villain and an evil Kyle, I think he works and I think it would be interesting to see him come back.
As for flaws, I think my critiques would be that the “Fool’s Gold” story felt more like an afterthought, I think it would have been cool if we saw SCP Kyle altering the minds of Kyle’s friends (like splice it together with the O5 scene where we see events on one end, than cut to SCP Kyle, than back to regular Kyle, etc), and of course that LONG FINAL FIGHT! But overall, it was still an entertaining chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Oh, and because I feel like being a troll *puts on troll glasses and adopts a high pitched voice* Decka and Orb weren’t actually related. They were just friends! NYEEEEEEEEH! *throws troll glasses away and tone returns to normal* Okay, I’m good.
willkuehne chapter 4 . 9/21/2018
i"m gonna take a guess here and say rhapsody is based of omniverse's ghostfreak Zs'Skayr right?
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