I agree with you believing that Sam wasn't mad at Freddie during the episode, but this is still a very clever and imaginative spin on it. I loved the phone call between them. You write the characters very well.

I love this.

Great story, love it.

Great story, love it

I LOVE the ending. LOVE.

Lol. HILARIOUS.

A-freaking-mazing! Just, wow! I LOVE this! You're an amazing, talented writer, and this fic is perfect. It could be like an actual script for the show, if it were still going...But this fic is awesome! You got the characters EXACTLY right, you got iCarly's sense of humor. It was just great! Amazing!

You've saying for ages that you are gonna update, showing previews, posting chapters tittles...

Why? It breaks my heart to be here without anything new to support :(

Excellent chapter! Haha, I love Spencer. I wish the show had him giving people seemingly impulsive but subtely experienced advice like that more often.

Your story with Lotta and F.G. was interesting; I could definetly see what you mean about this chapter having a bit of Angst. But...seriously, I really want a chapter about Freddie meeting Lotta now xD

Just be careful to watch out for on-going sentences. Sometimes the impact of what a character says can be so easily wrecked just by having to read one thought for too long with no breaths. Also, this chapter didn't really feel like it fit into the episode as well as some of your others, but it was still nice enough to be believable.

Overall, I immensely enjoyed your story! One thing I noticed is that you tend to use 'what' where the word 'which' should be, but other than that, your english is amazing. I hope that you someday decide to continue this story, but I can see where you're going with it getting harder and harder to keep writting. I can understand how that happens.

Thanks a lot for the read and good luck with any future writting!

~ TwisterKirby

I love how you spent the first half of the chapter actually introducing the wacky family that is the Puckett household before devving into Seddie.

And don't worry; some of the best Seddie scenes happen without it being necessary for the both of them to be present (iReuniteWithMissy x3). This would be one of them if only it happened...

~ TwisterKirby

Wow, the way you paralleled Gibby's walking in on Freddie and Tasha in iEnrage Gibby to Sam's walking in on Freddie and Carly in iSpeed Date was...VERY clever O_o

Seriously, I didn't take Sam's intentions behind training Gibby in that episode much to heart since she does always love torturing Freddie herself, but your version of it was amazing. And the controversial way you made her mad at Freddie yet get over it since she didn't want to lose him as a friend simply because of 'something stupid' as seeing him as a boyfriend, was nicely done too. And this is why I don't watch 98% of soap operas and romance novels out there; they completely overlook the friendship aspect between a couple. Your story doesn't do that, and I'm really hoping Dan doesn't do that either after iOMG.

I won't lie; at first I thought Sam would be mad because she really did believe Freddie and Tasha were an item, but of course, you went that extra step and knew she wouldn't be so untrusting of him to think that. The difference with Gibby though was that he was more blinded, while Sam actually had a reason to get mad. You have this awesome skill in looking so deeply into something so simple and exampling them within the happenings of an episode; it's just..wow.

~ TwisterKirby

Glad I'm not the only one who randomly squeled when watching the episode at the part when Freddie was yelling about how he was just 'foreign bacon'. Especially after Sam just talked about how she fell in love with bacon the scene before.

Anyway, I loved how you explaned Sam's opinion on what Freddie did in iSaved Your Life here. Based on how much Sam knows about Freddie's feelings for Carly, it was pretty believable for her to think that him dumping Carly in the end was more impressive than saving someone's life. He didn't go against his feelings and will by saving her, but went against every bit of greed he had to let her go.

Afterall, it shadowed how a lot of viewers probably felt about Freddie's character after watching the episode too, including me. The guy gets hit by a taco truck, breaks a leg and half an arm, acts so cool about it as if it's normal and just so happens to get the girl of his dreams as a compensation for that, just to drop the bombshell of giving her up right when he realized he didn't want to take advantage of her. It was more than a bit amazing even for Freddie to just go back to the way things were without complaint (past the level of "What did I do?"), so him getting some more indirect comfort from Sam in your story was nice.

Sam's sincerity in the episode was pretty amazing too. She opened Freddie's eyes and trusted him to break up with Carly himself even though Carly was her best friend and she wouldn't want her to get hurt. Even though iSaved Your Life was such a blatant Creddie episode, you expressed that much deeper Seddie bond in it very well in this chapter.

And yet, you managed to keep that amazing humor too. I think that's why a lot of iCarly watchers are Seddie fans; the two are just layers deeper than any of the other characters in the show and it sticks out like a soar thumb at times. Yet, they are two of the funniest characters at the same time.

Thanks a lot for the read; favourite chapter so far!

~ TwisterKirby

Most impressed by how you handled Carly. You made her that same sweet yet manipulative and pushy girl that she was in season three, which is a hard thing to do since her character is actually pretty hard to play around with.

Every single quote in this sone-shot had to be hilarious. You should be a writer for Dan xD

Favourite:

"FACE THE PAIN ALREADY, BENSON!" She yelled at him. "Carly will never love you!" Freddie yelled in pain and crawled in fetal position holding his forearm and cussing very loud all sorts of Spanish bad words.

~ TwisterKirby

Clichesbullet/Thatu! OMG! This... this... cannot be described. Every single oneshot captures iCarly's offbeat humor more perfectly than any other story I've read on here. Period. Each one was a magical treasure chest of character love- whatever I mean by that, it IS 1:30 in the morning. I would love to see what else you could come up with, but if you never update again, I'll be happy just rereading the six you already have up :D

oh my my my I think little Melanie's onto something! The reactions between these two give a more sistery vibe to the silena and clarisse dinamic 3