An Elizabeth, Caroline, Mary and Louisa. I thought I had slipped into a Pride and Prejudice story!

I very much Enjoyed your writing, it was on character but still original. I got excited early on when I could tell that it would be written well. Cheers!

You should really do a sequel. Just saying.

WOW!
I really enjoyed this story!

I LUV ur stories! Delicious torment is one of my favorites! keep writin!

(clapping) that was great!

cool :)

"With a betrothed such as he what woman could be held to a standard of maidenly denial?" So true!

As always I really loved this story.

Expecially these little interludes that just fit in so well with your other stories.

Loved it!

Love Allison

Will is the perfect gentleman. I love how you write their encounters, so romantic.

Gracious I love your writing style!

Bril update! I love this line "wisely directed toward me and not at you, seeing as we were in a building filled with weaponry." LOL!

I loved it! Their playfulness, longing, frustration, and above all else, love - you captured it perfectly.

I love it how you nicely tie all your stories together! This plot line is just another example of your wonderful talent at writing Will/Elizabeth. You could feel the passion between them and it builds to a perfect ending that stays canon to the original plot line of the movies. Well done! Looking forward to perhaps more one shots and an update on "Holiday" : )

Wonderful! You capture the passion between Will & Liz beautifully