This could have used a second chapter. But it was very bittersweet.

It is so beautifully written *_*
I loved it but it made me sad too. Well not sad-sad but a happy-sad!
I know that doesn't make sense at all but that's how I felt! :3

That's so sad! It was really great writing and I loved the story but I feel like crying now :'( I wish there could be a sequel or something where they finally meet and nothing changes, and they eat their lunch together on the same side of the door.

Awww! It's beautiful! 3 I love it

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OMG...so sad...D'X

it's so beautifully written! LUV iT! *heart*
it's like one of those descriptive essays/stories i had to write for writer's craft class...
so touching *sob...!*

one of my fav X3
thx for an excellent piece *heart*

This is quite sad. They're so close yet so far. Love this piece :)

Awwww,THIS needs a SEQUEL!yepdefinetly*puppy eyes*

its so sweet and gentle,hehe

you will continue right? RIGHT!

Loved this story! I almost wish there could be a continuation. The part about Izaya comparing his obsession to dating was really well written and enjoyable, especially. Favoriting!

Why did it had to end like this?

*Cries*

Nice story anyway :')

Awwww.

I really love this. I really like the ending in which you left it hanging like that without the two finding out who the other person was. I also like how you compared Izaya's interest in humans with that of a lover. Nicely done!

I AM torn between wanting you to continue or left the ending there, between wanting them to finally know who each other is or not, beacuse :

"But they both knew that if the other had figured out who they were, everything would change.

And it hurt."

ahh, such bittersweet story. thank you so much for sharing :)

aww... sad... TT but nice fic

this is so... Awwwwwwwww