I LOVE IT. It's so beautiful :" these fantasy world is so thick. I probably could feel reborn backhouse, the doll, the vibe, and strangely enough... theres a song playing in my mind when the sick girl's doll sang creepily. Just woah author. Well done. This is what I call excellent fantasy concept. Thank you author:"

AHHHH this was so amazing and well written. I thought this might be how it would end, but now I'm so curious.

Fantastic work!

SWEET

so cute!

fascinating and wonderful

this was amazing. I never read this fic because the summary disturbed me, but I'm so happy now that I did - it was disturbing, but it was amazing.

THAT. THAT WAS ADORABLE. Looking back on it, the structure was actually pretty choppy, but I think it really fit the story. It reflected how Reborn went through life, how it was almost like time was lost to him while he was creating his perfect doll. The way you wrote it kept it interesting, and the concept of the craftsmen who made magical dolls only made everything more engaging. I also really liked how the little bit at the beginning you used the story of the sick girl and the mentions of the music box to add a sort of eerie feel to the story, but by the end we've got a bit of romance! The way you used Giotto's character was also really awesome, and possessive Reborn was fun to read about near the end! Great job and thanks for posting!

u this is ...so awesome . it's like written art, when I was reading the scene where Reborn was creating Holly wood into Tsuna's body parts, I seriously thought it could be a fan-made anime, a beautiful fan-made anime . but really I love you! in a friendly way u oh and it makes sense to me as well.

actually it reminded me of that old greek myth. you know, the one where the guy makes a statue and falls in love with it and begs, aphrodite i think?, to bring it to life. or course the statue promptly falls in love with some other person and the poor guy who made it is left all alone. but yeah, thats what i kept thinking of

A. M. A. Z. I. N. G.
Wow... Just... Wow...

Awww that was so sweet, and I totally understand it, it makes perfect sense. I really loved it. :D

I loved this, wonderfully written.

amazing, absoloutly amazing

That was beautiful. *speaks breathlessly*

You have me stunned,
Tsuri

Beautiful. Simply amazing.