love the story! Is there more?

really loving this story! can't wait to read the rest!

I'm sorry to put it so bluntly, but...you're grammar is awful. I really hope you get a beta to fix all your mistakes!

I'm really enjoying your story. I'm intrigued with Draco's agenda and I'm going to keep reading to find out what's motivating him. Thanks for sharing!

~ A bit of constructive criticism, some of your paragraphs are hard on the eyes because they are so long. It would help the flow and give the reader a bit of a visual break if each time a different person speaks you create a new paragraph. Your dialogue is great, but it would make it much easier to follow.

aaww i really love draco and hermiones relationship

i hope they get to stay together without too much meddling

and i hope that pansy and harry and everyone else back off soon

that is if you finish this story, looking forward to reading the conclusion

Great story. I love Draco in it. I hope you someday update again.

i seriously love this story.

but have you discontinued it?

it looks like you haven't updated in over a year!

please update, i really want to know what happens next.

Okay, I just started reading your story three days ago, but so far I have enjoyed every second of it...I love how you make Draco in you're story...well...I just love Draco...but that's not the point. The point is you are an amazing writer and I love your story and I loved this chapter

Please email me when you review!

Thanks!

So funny. I think I woke my sister up I was laughing so loud. Draco and Hermione are so cute together.

hilarious!

I love it. Hermione gave Ron and harry a bit to chew on and has agreed to a secret meeting with Draco. Now, if only they would start dating. That would shock Dumb and Dumber. Draco could say that was his intentions. and the Slytherins would eventually see that Hermione is a great gal to have on their side, even if she is a Gryfindor.

Oh, that is so sweet. Their first kiss. Draco is so nice. and yet he is still Dracoish. I love that he pointes ot how stupid Harry and Ron are for not telling Hermione. If I was her I'd give those two a serious talking to. Then I'd start dating Draco and look into switching housesd.

Amazing! I think I am hooked on this story. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter.

This is fantastic. It has to be the most well written Hermione and Draco story I have ever read. And I have only read the first two chapters so far. I can hardly wait to see what happens.

UPDATE SOON!IM DYING 2 NOE WATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!