| Reviews for Spiderwebs |
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Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2011 I love this story! I hope you start it up again soon and as for the main pairing, I would like to see both *pouts* I mean, the AkuRoku has so much tension and stuff while the MarVex is a sad story and just as awesome...so I vote both because I hate choosing, you're a good author and I read sex Ed 101, I liked that story too n.n |
I'm Not Your Enemy chapter 3 . 7/14/2011 I already reviewed the last a/n-chapter so i'll review this one. please please please please continue with this! I was bored today and for some reason this fic crept into my mind. I spent ages going through my favs and alerts and I'm so happy I found it again! |
I'm Not Your Enemy chapter 4 . 10/13/2010 I think you should go with which pairing you like best. Also, the story is great and it's now made me sad that it's on hiatus :( I thought it was really good and you don't need to rewrite it. If you really want to you should get a beta-reader. One if the things you could do to improve this is state whose POV it is whenever it changes. Even just sending someone the files and asking them to read them to see if they're any good (which they undoubtedly will be). Hope this helps~~! contact me if you want anymore ideas or help _ |
I'm Not Your Enemy chapter 1 . 10/13/2010 Omg you used death note characters~~! Awesome chapter |
littleanemonefish chapter 1 . 10/13/2010 Just wanted to point out a little contradiction. You said it was the first day of school (that's what I assumed when Roxas said they didn't want to be late on their first day back), but then Demyx already had his books in his locker and Hayner ranted at Roxas for being late the previous weeks because of classes/tests/etc. I think there was one more, but I can't remember. Yeah, just try to pay attention to everything that you write. |
jared chapter 3 . 7/28/2010 yes please just for me this better than anything you could proabably be a book writer please just for me i love this its 2:05 am and i read all 3 ch buts it is tottally your decision |
blood as soft as silk chapter 3 . 6/27/2010 I like this story so far. I just found it and I hope you continue this. Poor Vexen, that would suck majorly. Also curious about Roxas and them too. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for the story so far. |
Dawnstep chapter 3 . 6/8/2010 Awwwww! Poor, poor Vexen! D: -huggles, then snarls at his parents- Grar! Homopohobic, insane, abusive... -grumbling fades off into distance- I would like to assure you, being a Christian myself, that we aren't all like that. O.o I, um, yeah. Vexy's voice reminds me of the Voice in Max's head in the Maximum Ride series. xD Sarcastic, conscious-like, and reandomly appearing... yep, fits the bill. xDD You are doing a /great/ job, and I assure you I, for one, am reading. I'm sure others are too... sometimes we all just forget to review. But, regardless, it's a good story and I'll start recommending it at this point, I have a few friends I discuss fanfiction with who might be interested. :3 |
Dance Of Flame chapter 3 . 6/8/2010 I think it's a good story and that you should keep it up. I kinda agree with Vexen. The voice is really annoying. Update it soon please! |
Mikky-Senpai chapter 3 . 6/8/2010 I really enjoy reading this story. So will you please continue to write it? XOXO Mikky |
MissRhi chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 Awes. There isn't a comment. Thats not cool, it's a pretty good start for a story! Anyways...you should do what you like for the different POV's. It's helpful and gives more of a variety y'know to y'know the characters! D Anyways, hurry for the next chapter! ~Lovely. Ps.: I like how you put the Death Note characters in your story, very random but pretty interesting. MelloxMatt! ;3 |