I like this. I like this a lot.

Shall you continue? Yes, please!

fuck yea

O.o I liked it :3 Poor Ryou X3

yikes! bakura is one mean sexy bastard, isn't he?

Good Job! I was a little surprised that it ended where it did...

Aww man.. that felt so sad, I actually cried this time. I really feel bad for Ryou, wow but this was so terrifying! They way you portray Bakura is brilliant, in fact I really see him acting like this! You guys truly capture the real Bakura so this is one amazing one-shot.

I love how Bakura showed just a bit of emotion about the part where Ryou said about his friend, I actually felt as though Bakura pitied him that his yadonushi doesn't have any friends and that's why he's in this twisted situation. In a way I see that Bakura cares yet at the same time he's being brutal towards him.

Amazingly written, it really sent chills down my spine! I love dark and twisted stories like these, great work guys! I hope to see more from you.

Here's a suggestion, I'd like to see Ryou run away from home and from Bakura and try to find his freedom because he can't take it anymore. I would love to see Bakura's expression once he realizes that his yadonushi won't be coming back home.

Ooohh. Now I get what you meant when you said that your (you guys? I'm bad at putting stuff into the plural form) said about your Yami no Bakura not being nice. He was deliciously sadistic in this, and you two conveyed it very well through his actions and his dialogue. I got chills when he called Ryou 'Pretty Ryou'.

Great job!