Reviews for Playtime
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
Was hoping for a porcelain dildo...

but still gud.
mickelus chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Liked the story, would love to see a new chapter. Alternate ending for chapter 4...Then Buffy snapped his neck.
Lilianna Ownes chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
In love!
katsky5 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
im enjoying this story way to much. good work!
gecoma chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
great cant wait to see what happens
gecoma chapter 2 . 1/16/2011
another great chap
gecoma chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
great chap but wheres the missing chapter?
Associate Proffeser Evil chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
! clifhanger! NOW?

plz update soon, this story is wiked good
TeQuerio chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Where did Tara go?
AliceLuvr53 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Okay, if you leave us with serving like that it's generally nice to give us some sort of conclusion... Please?
TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
For staters, you initially repeated words a bit too often. The dialogue feels uncomfortable somehow. Not due to the content, just in manner of construction. Feels a bit OOC too.

In short, even if it's a fic that's been done time and time again, you could probably make it quite okay if you went back and gave it some more work.