| Reviews for Playtime |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 Was hoping for a porcelain dildo... but still gud. |
mickelus chapter 4 . 5/25/2013 Liked the story, would love to see a new chapter. Alternate ending for chapter 4...Then Buffy snapped his neck. |
Lilianna Ownes chapter 4 . 11/8/2012 In love! |
katsky5 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011 im enjoying this story way to much. good work! |
gecoma chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 great cant wait to see what happens |
gecoma chapter 2 . 1/16/2011 another great chap |
gecoma chapter 3 . 1/16/2011 great chap but wheres the missing chapter? |
Associate Proffeser Evil chapter 2 . 11/16/2010 ! clifhanger! NOW? plz update soon, this story is wiked good |
TeQuerio chapter 1 . 10/30/2010 Where did Tara go? |
AliceLuvr53 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010 Okay, if you leave us with serving like that it's generally nice to give us some sort of conclusion... Please? |
TheRedPoet chapter 1 . 5/16/2010 For staters, you initially repeated words a bit too often. The dialogue feels uncomfortable somehow. Not due to the content, just in manner of construction. Feels a bit OOC too. In short, even if it's a fic that's been done time and time again, you could probably make it quite okay if you went back and gave it some more work. |