Not just because my actual name is Momo (stupid parent...) but I'm a HUGE HitsuHina fan, but anyway, I should have noticed the genre . Because I'm also now a huge Shiyori fan as well haha, it was nicely done

really liked the way you express Hiyori's feelings toward the whole fight... well written and in character.

My only complain is the last 2 sentences, but please take no offense in what I'm saying, cuz I'm just a BIG Shinji/Hiyori shipper

great job though

Great story! Course, I (stupidly forgot to read the genre and) began reading this story expecting it to be a romance... *sweatdrops* Yeah, I'm a bit of a dunce sometimes, haha.

But this was an awesome story! I loved how you let us see into Hiyori's thoughts, strange as they were?, and all the things that I never would've thought of otherwise... Great job!

tats exactly how i would have happen if i owned bleach! i a BIG hitsukarin fan! anywhoos i really like the story!

I loved this. A very well excited piece. The setup served to make it all the more intense. Excellent work.

Sora(:

Uuuh. I loved it...

(I really hope she doesn't die, but it seems she's one of the few good people that die...)

eeeek! you put my name on there! yay! its a great one-shot... but i think i already told you that. hehe!