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MockingJay Potter Slytherin chapter 21 . 5/25 You should really update because I really wanna know how the meting of Lucius went |
Yvonne Park chapter 21 . 1/2/2018 Aw, I wanted to see what happened after. :( haha those two are so cute together! I wish there was more! This story was great! I wouldn't totally read more! :) -Yvonne |
sterekdrarry chapter 15 . 6/25/2017 I've read this before and enjoyed it, I still enjoy this however, it really bothers me when Hermione is asking very personal questions about Harry's sex life, why can't he ever tell her 'That's private' instead of out right telling her. It's so invasive and inconsiderate. At times people write Hermione and Ron as very irritating people cause they can be bossy, controlling and nosy and Ron as an immature brat. But I still like this. |
Rubinaaimin chapter 16 . 2/19/2017 lol, there is a company called dm in germany, they sell cosmetics amd household-stuff but also some cheap jewelery |
Rubinaaimin chapter 18 . 2/19/2017 lol, there is a company called dm in germany, they sell cosmetics amd household-stuff but also some cheap jewelery |
Rubinaaimin chapter 2 . 2/18/2017 I really like the way you write |
sasuhinas fan chapter 21 . 8/25/2016 Look how wonderful this was! Amazing! Thanks for writing it! |
JustKeepSwimming3764 chapter 7 . 3/9/2016 I'm just really happy that Draco is jealous and I love their feelings towards eachother! And you just do an amazing job portraying it! This is becoming one of my favorite fanfictions!w |
JustKeepSwimming3764 chapter 2 . 3/9/2016 The potion where you smell what you are attracted to is Amortentia. Is Euphoria just another name? Btw I love this fanfiction so far! |
mrsMxyzptlk chapter 21 . 1/18/2016 I've read a few Harry/Veela Draco stories recently, and I really like the angle this one takes on it. Other stories tend to have Draco or the adults basically coerce Harry into a relationship, or else the Veela powers completely change the boys' opinions of each other. It basically ends up with someone telling Harry, "You have to mate with Draco now and stay with him for the rest of your life, or he'll die, and you don't have any say in it." I like the way you made Harry the pursuer here instead. I like that he figured out that he was Draco's mate and decided that he wanted Draco himself, so that he's not forced into a relationship that he doesn't want. I also like the development of the boys' relationship, especially how you pointed out that they've been obsessed with each other for years. I agree with you that the ending was a bit weak, but it's still satisfying to see the relationship go public and Ron come to terms with it, albeit reluctantly. (And it's certainly better than leaving the story unfinished!) I was surprised that you had Draco flip out in class and reveal his wings, along with the relationship, but once I thought about it, I realized that it really makes sense. With all the people in Hogwarts and all the weird situations they get into, it's probably pretty unlikely that someone _wouldn't_ threaten or touch Harry to bring out Draco's super-protective side. Thanks for an enjoyable read. |
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 21 . 11/21/2015 Blaise needs someone now. |
LadyWhiteRose2015 chapter 21 . 9/13/2015 oh, and wow. I was reaching for the next chapter and discovered it was finished. well done! |
mischiefpuff chapter 21 . 3/24/2015 XD omg that ending line killed me wow...my face is really hot from this, i curse blushing so easily |
Aithusa Vase chapter 15 . 7/17/2014 i do not think 'dismally' means what you think it means in an earlier chapter too but good story otherwise a little ooc but still believable 3 |
Ginge chapter 21 . 7/9/2014 I'd love to see Lucius' reaction. And just kind of see them growing old together. You're talented! One question; Sequel? :) |