This story is well-written! It's been ages, but I have been looking for a good zombie-Naruto fic and this one definitely fits the bill, thanks!

interesting chapter moving along nicely. i liked how naruto flipped otoshi off at the end.

heh. not a bad chapter here. so bone head naruto finally talks to hinata? cool. pretty good work here.

This has started to be a well written story, and I commend you for that. This is an interesting concept, one that I wouldn't mind seeing occasionally. There is the slight problem of the ninja forgetting how to walk up walls, apparently, as they always are taking the stairs in this story, but other than that, it flows together pretty well, and I look forward to reading more of it in the future.

well, certainly feel sorry for that couple. and you certainly make those root guys seem like worthless dogs.

good work on making jiraiya make naruto look a second glance at hinata. hehe, that could be interesting.

nice mood and feeling in these.

hmm.. pretty good. I like knowing something of otoshi's background though i highly doubt orochimaru would part with such a powerful weapon. heh. it seems there aren't going to be any adults in konoha very soon aside from kurenai. (evil grin.) baby zombie anyone?

Interesting chapter, though surprising no one would have noticed shizune escape.

a word of advice i'd say though, is avoid switching to first person in this story. the reason being that one you have more then one character, so you get lost with who is talking when you do the first person, and two because you haven't used the first person in the rest of the story with the exception of madara's past and it feels awkward in story use.

aside from that i enjoyed that chapter fairly well. :D

interesting and quite a few characters with different powers. fairly well described and nasty.

still waiting to see when tsunande's illness hits her or if she really did kill shizune.

nice chapter. a few grammar issues and a little repetition but not bad.

the one thing i'd say is you really didn't set up reiko's sudden fear quite what it needed from previous chapters. aside from that pretty good.

I do have to say though, ken is a dick, I hope this niomi or a zombie tears his head off.

hmm... good chapter. liked how you made shino find out about reiko. one thing you have issues here though is you're repeating phrases too often too close together. things of wounds in the body, if the idea has been said once ealier in the paragraph there's no need to repeat it.

hmmm... you seem to take out neji too easily. I'd think he'd be a little more dangerous even against a jinchuriki. and otoshi isa sick one isn't he? what a creep. think i'll like it when he dies more then any of the others.

i like tazuki. surprisng adding an evil akimichi.

some of the fight scenes feel a little weak. might want to add the characters emotions and more of the feel to their bodies to strengthen these.

I'd say your portrayal of madara is exaggerated... except we've all seen the comics, so it works. not bad.

though fearful of the size, I look forward to reading the next chapter.

not bad. they're interesting characters and you've developed the villains in such a way that they have likeable and detestable aspects at once.

one thing though is that your battle paragraphs are a little big. need to cut them up a bit and think of where the new one starts. a few tense issues, but beyond that fairly well done. look foreward to the next chapters when they come out.

Freaking awsome story. a naru zombie story...

not bad. a few grammer issues.

the one thing I have to contend with a bit is how you made kurenai's character, of coming to save me! she isn't so weak, considering she is team leader of 3 genin and she's a jonin herself. that she only watched shikamaru felt a little out of character for her. But aside from the kurenai part pretty good.

maybe lee is too happy? he does take things seriously when they go to pot like this.

the first paragraph of kiba's is a bit awkward. but the rest of his story is good.

on hinata, wouldn't she have more guts by now? she seems a little bit pathetic. I'd figure she'd know to stand and fight and not let hanabi push her around.

Does it say somewhere shino's dad is that mental? it seemed in the actual series he was actually a caring individual. so this scene bugged me in that it felt very out of character. sounds more like something orochimaru would do.

but all the build up here is really nice. really great work so far. I still regret you killed kakashi so early if this is going to have so many chapters, but you've built everything up. nice cruelty on choji's part there. very good horror thus far.