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   emsaduem chapter 1 . 10/13/2015 I really loved it! Super fluffy and happy. \(*-*)/ |
| ShadowAngel100 chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 Awwwww this is adorable xx |
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014 This was so great. I loved it. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2013 loved it! |
| MsStacy1214 chapter 1 . 5/15/2013 loved it! |
| callalily1617 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012 that was beautiful TTTT thank you for remaking that scene. i prefer this one than the actual ending xD duh. fanFICTION 3 i wish it ended this way i was like crying when this scene happened in the anime.. partially because i remember my bf XD there was a time before school ended for summer and the last time we were together i wouldnt let him go home and i kept saying to him "One more..." and "Last one.." after saying "one more" four times i told him "ten more..." ...just sharing . haha i loved your story 3 FAVED |
| GabyS.99 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 AWESOME! This was such a good story! I love the song you used! |
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 1 . 1/13/2012 This was beautiful, they make such a good couple and you managed to explore this. Good work! |
| sillypandalover91 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011 Beautiful, I can't really say more / |
| BananaMilkSangtae chapter 1 . 9/19/2010 Tht was SOOO good! It was just so freakin cute :) You're an awesome writer! xxx |
| Hotako Tomoe chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 First off, Cannocally that scene could never have happened, like the other reviewer said; Taiga texted Ryuuji saying that he never said that he loved her, and called him a idiot while he was looking for the 'pair' of a sock in her travel bag she forgot.. Now, putting that aside, looking at this as a re-write, it would have totally made the ending loose its impact but... Ya know what? I'd rather it been THIS way.. Its just me, but I loved this version of it, this would have been a FAR better way, well done! Maybe if Ryuuji did this, she'd not have thought she was the lone star in the sky. Anyway! Keep it up! |
| ZeronosVega chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 This was definitely better than the original scene. I personally believe that it adds more depth to their relationship, something the anime rushed (although, I haven't seen it having only read the light novel series). You did an excellent job on your story. |
| alejandra chapter 1 . 6/19/2010 one word:AWESOME. it was like wow... no joke...ur the bomb!:) |
| RaineyLolita chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 Sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! RyuXTai forever! Compliments on being a guy and actually doing something semi-fluffy! |
| kimachi chapter 1 . 5/20/2010 Wow! This is a great story :D My heart was racing as they continued kissing xD Great work! :) |
