This is really lovely! I wish it went on forever! :D Your writing is really beautiful. Thanks for sharing this little gem!

That was fantastic!

Red

I loved how it really kept the spirit of the movie. When I was reading, I really saw them in scenarios similar to the film but having these new experiences.
It made me happy. _

Very cute and well written! It was short, sweet, and simple - enough to keep your reader intrigued while giving them a good and hooked ending. I like how it didn't hold too much of Seiji's thoughts. Most Whisper of the Heart storied tend to have that flaw. Because we don't really know his thoughts all that much as they aren't really conveyed in the movie, it's sort of corny when people put them in their.

Anyways, I really liked your story~~

-Mei

This is wonderful! I love these little character studies, I write them all the time. Simply magical. You have a gift!

Aww! That was so sweet and adorable!

sweet short and to the point ... i loved it! it left me craving for more.

Oh Mah Gawd I loved it! :D

This was absolutely lovely. It's so nice to see more stories for this fantastic movie. You hit all the right notes, too; while everything listed was ordinary, there's a hint of magic to it, much like what can be found in the movie. Beautiful job!

All I can say is, awwwwww. Love, love, love! Seiji and Shizuku are such a squishy couple. :) I was extremely surprised to see no reviews for this. I had to right this horrible wrong. Good job. Well written, in character, and purely adorable. :)