Hey, what and amazing story, love the idea and place of the story. Thanx for making a likable Oc, some people have the tendency to make their Oc too arrogant or hot-headed.
Will you continue this story? please do its really good.

You've managed to capture my attention with this first chapter, so I shall continue to read. But a little tip, it's spelled Urahara, not Uruhara, just for future reference.

-J.L

Hi!
Just to say that I'm a girl!
There are already 16 persons who read it in a few hours!
They must like your story and hopefully my translation does it justice.
Have a nice day!

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Woot lovely! I am awed by your attention details, which makes this fanfiction so absorbing. The interaction between the characters are simply amazing!

GREAT story thus far! よくできました。 I cannot wait to read the sequel! 読んでいます。

truly an amazing story, im heading over to the sequal to continue! (ps. great job on keeping everyone in character!)

"the dreaded tone of displeasure" XD

Wow, your story is so good! Sorry for taking so long to finish reading it, i'm in the middle of exams, but i got a day off tomorrow. I must congratulate (can't spell it sorry, english is not my first language) you. I really enjoyed reading it. I think you have an amazing talent! I will begin with the next story now... Thank you and keep writing, oh i wanted to ask you, do you draw? since your main character is an amazing artist? I draw and i love it... Just wanted to know... Hehe i'm off to read the sequel!

Sry but it is spelled as Urahara ! It is juz weird .. Quite a nice story ! well done.. *give shoulder a pat*

loved the story, can't wait to read the sequel :)

please tell me your gonna write a sequel! whats gonna happen at the university! whats gonna happen between erisia and bykuya! please write soon:)

~byakuya's4ever~

im really feeling the "start of something new" song vibe here:) byakuya is starting to fall! hahahahahaah:)

~byakuya's4ever~

cant wait for the byakuya x OC:D you know whats annoying? i cant write hearts on these comments and it REALLY bothers me:( anyhoooooo great chapter:D

~byakuya's4ever~