Wow this is actually really, really beautiful. My favorite part has got to be when Puck suddenly wants to be Peter so that he can kiss Santana-Wendy-only Santana tells him to shut up and Brittany's Peter and then they live in happily ever after for a while. I don't know, I just think that it says so much and that it's beautiful. Lovely job. (:

You're breaking my heart with your beautiful words!

Okay, when they recited the lines to each other when Santana was leaving... that made me tear up just a tad. Not gonna lie on that one. Great job!

so deep

Soo sweetttt!

Wow. I'm new to the whole Brittany/Santana ship but wow. I loved this. Brilliant. x

I adore this line: "When she's free-falling from a throw she can close her eyes and pretend she's headed towards the second star and then straight on until morning."

The last paragraph was a bit abrupt (the rest of the story had slower, dreamlike fairytale pacing), but lovely nonetheless.

Aw I love Peter Pan but most these two, they're so cute!