I'm dying to see this fanfic continue with a M rating. I know it's a long time since this fanfic has been updated, but can you consider updating this fanfic?

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I say continue it on if you can do it. After adding a "Meet the Parents" part to it, place the lemon portion at where you want the story to end.

Make sure that Keiichi and Belldandy get their lemon section as well. It just wouldn't be AMG without it.

I have read this story a lot. Even I'm trying to do a fanfict with an OC and Peorth. Don't feel bad that you're having some trouble, cause I am too. I'm trying to add some type of villian to match Peorth's personality in my story, but I get easily distracted from working on the story.

Please , update this , I really want to see more mayhem and romance . :D

nice story , can you make more :D

Its a nice story, not sure where is going, look more like a relationship story.

I vote to continue, this is gold keep up the great work.

Out of all the chapters in this fanfict that I've read, this one is my favorite. I can't help but read this fanfict once every few weeks because of how Hild is used in this story.

I wonder if Marller will also have to satisfy Travi's sexual needs.

I seriously can't wait for the next chapters in this story. It would encourage me to start a fanfict with an OC and Peorth.

There are many fan-fics that I read over and over again. This is one of them. I would like for it to continue as far as possible even to the point that in ends with a Demonic Marriage between the OC and Hild. I look forward to this story continuing, no matter how it ends.

Please do another chapter soon! I like where this story is going! I hope Travis gets Hild and/or Mya pregnant! That would be funny!

Dood this story is awsome this is the best O.M.G fanfic ever please keep this story going and bring out the next chapter i want my hild fix damn it. :)

Good lemons are very hard to write, smut is easy and a big turnoff too. For sex scenes the best thing is to let the reader imagine it all. Take the lovers behind closed doors, or somewhere private and just state that something happened.

For instance:

Hild took Travis to her office, cleared it of her assistants, then cleared the desk. Looking at Travis as only the Queen of Seduction can, she said "I know you are up to the task big man..."

Then go to whatever happens after. Let the reader imagine the rest.

Good luck.

I say continue. As for ideas...

Travis becomes Keiichi's doublet partner?

If I think of anymore, Shall I PM you them?

I hope the silver eyes thing is explained in the next chapter. And the way that Travis just "met" K1 seems to say forces greater than heaven or hell are involved.

A gradual build to a stories climax is good. It allows for character development and the reasons behind any changes. On the other hand the novel Dune by Frank Herbert is slower than Congress with is itself dead slow. Balance is the key. Too bad the mortal bitch did not have to deal with Hild... But maybe later...