I really enjoyed this story, I hope you intend to continue it. This is definitely a story that has lots of potential for artistic exploring, though I find it interesting that Yuna hasn’t thought once of her father the whole journey. I like her growing attachment to Kimhari as well. The ending seems rather abrupt. Is it a sort of cliffhanger? Either way it was a well written story and engaging – I hope you write more and get many more reviews!