Oh, great chapter. Talk about letting him habit. It's funny, because of all the emails I get, I rarely see updates from stories that I follow. Mind you, I only follow one other story than this one. Anyway, I was excited to see the update and I cannot wait for more. I wonder how a certain someone is going to dig themselves out of this hole considering in one of the earlier previews there relationship is fine for the most part. I definitely enjoyed this chapter, had me at the edge of my seat. Plus, it was super long and I was living for it. Just knowing what is to come is enough to get me excited for chapters to come. Thank you for continuing your stories, I have learned a long time ago that there are some things that are worth the time and the wait.
Until the next chapter.

Sweet! You updated! You should post about Wendy and Nibs, or revisit that relationship. I miss reading about that pairing! Like if Wendy gets jealous and seduces Nibs, or Nibs wants Wendy again and they have an affair.

omg i meant can** not cant lol

i know i cant always trust you to update! i hope youre doing well and are happy and healthy!

Yasss, I am so lucky! As I was once again rereading this trilogy, I got, not one, but two freaking new chapters! (excuse my language). At this point, it no longer concerns me about when you are going to update, because I can trust that no matter what, you will. That is refreshing. To this day, this is one of the few stories that I've read that are not already completed. This story is going somewhere and I love where it is going. Maybe I have stated it before, but I do not leave reviews...and when I do it's rare. I know it's bad, hence, I only read completed stories. I just wanted to tell you to keep up the good work, I love this story, and no matter how long it gets, I will probably...in a few months... rereading the whole thing starting from part 1. Thanks again for the amazing chapters, I will remain a fan, one day to become an air conditioner. LOL. As for the review, I happen to really like the pace. We know peter's character, so of course, rescue or not, he would hesitate. The development of the characters is great and I am so excited for them to return to Neverland. I am very forgiving of the cliffhangers, only because they leave something to the imagination and has me pumped for what is to come.

P.S Did I mention that I love this story? Cause I do!

The truth is out. All the tea has been spilled. Yay, this was a very satisfying chapter. I tried to pace myself, but alas, even school and work could not stop me from reading this chapter as fast as I did. Honestly, karma is something else, but damn does she know how to work. It got rid of a problem that was just bugging me. (It's good that it bothered me, because the relief is so good). as always your cliffhangers leave me wanting more without driving me over the edge. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's transformation time and I can definitely see that that the audience is in for a treat. Great job as always. Thank you for updating. now if you will excuse me, I am going to make my way back to the first book.

P.S This review was hard to write because I didn't want to include spoilers. Lol.

Thank you for updating! Awesome chapter, like always! I'll be waiting patiently for the next one. (:

Oh my goodness. Well, see, I knew there was a reason I couldn't trust doctors. She, that doctor Smith is a piece of work. I am glad there was more Darren and Jessica in this chapter. They are a real pair of characters. Once again excellent job and thank you for responding to my comments, I always feel special because of it. The Golem has retreated for now, but it is sure to make a reappearance (probably in a few months because you are a person with ish to do). I am addicted to this trilogy and can't wait for the next chapter, but until then I wish you are great and happy day. of course the month as well.

p.s soooooooo goooooood!

You...have no idea...how long... I have been putting off reading this new chapter. When it first came out, I was still rereading the second book. Then, all of a sudden poof! new chapter(got my notifications for this on. I believed in you... and as always, you delivered! My heart cannot take this anymore, I need mores, more chapters! (gollum voice). Anyway, thank you so much for another punch in the heart. I needed that. As always, the best writers tend to be the busiest, so I hope to see more when you have the time. Great writing as always. Thanks again.

thank you for updating! i'm obsessed with this story and it makes me happy you haven't forgotten about it :D

please update! i'm obsessed with this story

I started to reread this story again because it's been awhile since the last time I did. And I love Peter and Wendy together but I can't help but want Nibs to be with Wendy. Especially since he remembered their promise and practically didn't do it with Chi because of that. I'm so torn :((( but I love your story and I wish it never ends! Or at least it'll end with a threesome relationship of Peter, Nibs, and Wendy forever lol

I'm sorry I didn't mean to leave 3 well now 4 comments... I thought it wasn't sending through and I have no idea how to delete them either... so hopefully you take in what I say:)

I love your crazy yet entertaining story! It has been kind of messed up, but I really like it! I extremely dislike the witch, Azraeil she needs to be killed already let's be real! She has been around for way too long she just needs to die! I also am kind of really disappointed too... I honestly love the NIBS and WENDY pairing! I really believe they should be together! Please don't kill that pairing. I have grown so attached to them, and they can't be done yet. I hate the fact Nibs reunited with Layla! If you could have Wendy be jealous of their reunion then she seduces Nibs that would be hot, and he falls for it, or one day Wendy looks really hot, and Nibs can't resist they make love then Wendy realizes she has feelings for Nibs because we all know she does! She can't say she doesn't at all. Usually, in fanfics authors make fans happy by going with the couple they like the best, and I know everyone likes Peter/Wendy, but a majority of my friends read this, and LOVED Wendy and Nibs, and before I put my comment up here I noticed that everyone is for Wendy and Nibs too! You should definitely pair them together! That would make me the happiest girl in the world, and if not please make a fanfic about Wendy and Nibs because no one else can write them like you can! I'm a big fan of your writing continue to update, and please consider getting Nibs and Wendy together! They are 10Xs hotter than Peter and Wendy besides Peter has had sex with basically every girl why can't wendy hook up with nibs she should find out that he has been womanizer she has no idea! Just some ideas please a majority of your fans and I would pleased to see NIBS and WENDY together! Wendy and Nibs complete each other the bad boy, and the good girl, it's like gossip girl! Chuck and Blair Nibs and Wendy! After Blair had sex with Chuck she fell for him, but was in denial, and was fixated on Nate like Wendy is with Peter! IF you could have Wendy for Nibs you would make everyone happy! Thanks! Keep updating! xoxo and sorry I may have double posted this...

I love your crazy yet entertaining story! It has been kind of messed up, but I really like it! I extremely dislike the witch, Azraeil she needs to be killed already let's be real! She has been around for way too long she just needs to die! I also am kind of really disappointed too... I honestly love the NIBS and WENDY pairing! I really believe they should be together! Please don't kill that pairing. I have grown so attached to them, and they can't be done yet. I hate the fact Nibs reunited with Layla! If you could have Wendy be jealous of their reunion then she seduces Nibs that would be hot, and he falls for it, or one day Wendy looks really hot, and Nibs can't resist they make love then Wendy realizes she has feelings for Nibs because we all know she does! She can't say she doesn't at all. Usually, in fanfics authors make fans happy by going with the couple they like the best, and I know everyone likes Peter/Wendy, but a majority of my friends read this, and LOVED Wendy and Nibs, and before I put my comment up here I noticed that everyone is for Wendy and Nibs too! You should definitely pair them together! That would make me the happiest girl in the world, and if not please make a fanfic about Wendy and Nibs because no one else can write them like you can! I'm a big fan of your writing continue to update, and please consider getting Nibs and Wendy together! They are 10Xs hotter than Peter and Wendy besides Peter has had sex with basically every girl why can't wendy hook up with nibs she should find out that he has been womanizer she has no idea! Just some ideas please a majority of your fans and I would pleased to see NIBS and WENDY together! Wendy and Nibs complete each other the bad boy, and the good girl, it's like gossip girl! Chuck and Blair Nibs and Wendy! After Blair had sex with Chuck she fell for him, but was in denial, and was fixated on Nate like Wendy is with Peter! IF you could have Wendy for Nibs you would make everyone happy! Thanks! Keep updating! xoxo